Someone's Watching You (by valli) - comments

[holden_girl9051]

i love it already

i wonder who it is, i think it might be sam

stupid jack pushing her away

stupid sam making him too

great chapter please update soon

[shortie_689]

Oh yay!!! This looks exciting!!! I really don't like Sam not in here and not in the show she is so pushy and selfish how can she just dominate everything!!! How annoying!!!

This is GREAT!!!

Keep it up!!!

[-x-Siana-x-]

Oh my god! I love it

Poor Martha, Jack's stupid!!!!

I don't like Sam!

Please update soon!!!

Siana__x

[vale4eva]

Who would do such a retched and awful thing to poor Martha

Jack Get your head together!

More please

[valli]

Thanks for your comments Here is a sneak peek from the next chapter:

“How is she doing? Is she going to be alright?” Alf asked.

“Yes. We managed to stop the bleeding and there were no signs of a brain injury. But…”

“But what? There might be something worse?” Ric asked.

[beckyboo]

Awww im loving this

Poor Martha!

Update soon

[Barbara]

I like it already!

Poor Martha!

I wonder who pushed her down the stairs. Sam maybe?

Please update soon!

[holden_girl9051]

I still think it is sam that pushed her

Sam would so want martha out of the picture

great chapter

Please update soon

[cattyLove]

I really love your story!

But Sam was pretty stupid.

Jack must choose Martha

and Sam, you need to leave!

Please update soon!

[-x-Siana-x-]

I dont like Sam!

Jack's going to chose Martha!!!

Well he best!

Ha!

Love it

Update soon please

Siana__x