Tasha Posted September 22, 2006 Report Share Posted September 22, 2006 (Jack and Tasha hug) Dr Kim change that before i kill you. Never put Jack and Tasha's name in a sentence like that. And its meant to be Martha not Tasha Great chapter though. Poor Amanda and Dan, lol at Colleen, yay for Paris and Irene, and yeh Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 22, 2006 Report Share Posted September 22, 2006 Chapter 4 (Jack and Martha's house. Tony knocks door down) Tony- Martha! Please wake up. Brad- I'll call the ambulance. Sally- Where are her babies? Tony- Oh god! They've been taken. Brad- The ambo's are on their way. ******************************************************************** (The beach. Amanda and Dan are walking at the beach while Colleen stares at Dan) Colleen (Muttering to herself)- I can't love Dan I just can't. ******************************************************************** (Robbie and Tony's house) Rachel- Does this mean we're together? Robbie- I guess it does. (Tasha enters) Tasha- Suprise Robbie- What the hell are you doing here? Tasha- I came to tell you that I would like to hook up again tonight because last night was fun. (Rachel runs out crying) Robbie- HOW DARE YOU DO THAT. GET OUT! Tasha- Toodles sweetheart. I'll be waiting in bed for you. HAHAHA. ******************************************************************** (Irene's house) Paris- How does it look? Drew- Shiny. (Irene enters) Irene- Hey sweetheart. (Kisses Paris) Drew- I've gotta go and see Cassie. (Drew leaves) Paris- Do you love me? Irene of course I do. Paris- Then marry me. (Irene faints) ******************************************************************** (The hospital. Doctor comes out) Tony- How is she? Doc- She'll live. She wants to see her children. (Tony enters hospital room) Tony- How are you? Martha- I want to see my babies. Tony- This is so hard to tell you... Martha- Just say it. Tony- Your babies have been kidnapped. (Martha starts bursting into tears and trying to get out of bed) Tony- You need to rest. Sally and Brad are looking for your babies. (Jack runs in) Jack- I just heard. Oh babie. (Jack and Tasha hug) ******************************************************************** (The police station) Sally- Is there anything else I can do? Fitzy- You've done all you can. Brad- Don't hesitate to ask if you need any help. Fitzy- Thanks for the offer but there is nothing else you can do. ******************************************************************** (Irene's house) Paris- Are you alright? Irene- I'm fine. Paris- Do you have an answer? Irene- Of course I'll marry you. (Irene and Paris kiss) ******************************************************************** (The beach) Amanda- I feel so much better now. Dan- Good. Amanda- Dan I'm in love with you. (Just at that moment a Tsunami comes) Next time on Home and away: . Will Dan and Amanda die? . Which business gets destroyed? . Will Robbie and Rachel get back together? . The person who trashed Tony and Robbie's house is revealed but will they be caught? . Who has a brain tuma? Ohh please update I hope it Beth (Beth the ghost stalker-hehe ) who trashed the house, Please don't kill Robbie or Tony with the brain tuma Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-michelle- Posted September 22, 2006 Report Share Posted September 22, 2006 Great chapter. Cant wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cake Posted September 23, 2006 Report Share Posted September 23, 2006 That's really good! lol Colleen and Alf/Dan - what couple! Can't wait for more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted September 23, 2006 Report Share Posted September 23, 2006 Very cool, but what happened to Kim and Rachel? They were the best couple! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted September 24, 2006 Report Share Posted September 24, 2006 Yes! Please continue....Rachel's a bit old 4 Rob isn't she? He's even younger than Kim! Tasha has turned into a bit of a cow, though, hasn't she? I like it though....yeah, I do....why did Rob and Tash break up? And Rach ' A loyal H&A fan, in need of an avatar, and in the middle of writing a fan-fic....wish me luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 25, 2006 Report Share Posted September 25, 2006 This good, wish Beth was around as well as Mattie and Lucas but it great fan fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted October 16, 2006 Report Share Posted October 16, 2006 Have you given this up?? Please don't!! I want the next update!!! Please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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