dr kimberley Posted September 18, 2006 Report Posted September 18, 2006 Characters: Alf- Alf is retired and lives in the apartment above the diner with his wife Colleen. Amanda- Amanda is Unemployed and her daughter and son don't like her. Brad- Brad is the Deputy principal and is married to Sally. Cassie- Cassie is a Teacher and is going out with Drew. Colleen- Colleen is Retired and married to Alf. Dan- Dan is the School counciller and lives with Leah, Ryan an VJ. Drew- Drew is th Manager of the gym, is going out with Cassie and lives at Irene's. Jack- Jack is a Detective and is married to Martha with two children. Leah- Leah is the owner of the diner and is happily married. Martha- Martha is currently on maternity leave. Robbie- Robbie is single and owns Beth's old house with Tony. He owns a boat service. Rachel- Rachel is a Doctor and Phyciatrist, she is single and lives at Amanda's old apartment. Sally- Sally ia a Teacher and is married to Brad. Cassie and Pippa live there. Tony- Tony is widowed and lives with Robbie. Irene- Irene and Paris are dating and Drew lives at the beach house. Irene is still at the diner. Ryan- Ryan is a rebel of a teenager but is very nice. VJ- VJ is a kind teenager and always helps his mother Pippa- Pippa is the sweetest girl who's ambition is to be a doctor. ******************************************************************** (Summer Bay high) Brad- I hope you have learnt not to throw stink bombs down the corridor Ryan. Ryan- Yes I wont do it again. Hey, are you annoyed Paris has taken your job as principal? Brad- No deputy is good enough for me. (Cassie walks in) Cassie- Sorry to interupt Brad, Ryan you are not to arrive late to my class today. Understood? Ryan- Yes ms Turner. Cassie- Good, carry on. ******************************************************************** (Amanda's house) Amanda- I hate Belle, I hate belle, I HATE BELLE! (Someone knocks on the door) Amanda- GO AWAY! Leah- Amanda, please open up I want to help you. Amanda- I said GO AWAY! (Amanda throws her glass at the door? Leah- Ok, ok I'm going. ******************************************************************** (The diner) Irene- How did you go love? Leah- No good. She was really angry. I wish I could do more to help. Irene- Don't put yourself down darl, you've done all you can. Leah- Yeah but she can't keep drinking her sorrows away. Irene- I know. ******************************************************************** (The apartment) Colleen- Alf, lunch is ready. Alf- Ok, I'll be there in a minute. Colleen- If you don't hurry up your lunch will go cold. Alf- Flammin heck women I said I'll be there in a minute and I will ok! Colleen- Don't get cranky at me. I'm going for a walk. Alf- Bye ******************************************************************** (The warf) Colleen- Hello Robbie. Robbie- Hey Colleen. How are you? Colleen- Good thanks. Just had a blue with the husband. Robbie. Oh ok. (Robbie's phone rings) Robbie- Excuse me for a second Colleen. Hello. Oh hey Tony. What? I'll be there right away. Sorry Colleen I've gotta go. Colleen- Is everything alright Robbie? Robbie- No time to explain. Bye colleen. Colleen- Toodles. ******************************************************************** (Summer Bay High) Cassie- Alright class settle down. (Cassie sits on a pin) Cassie- OUCH! WHO PUT THIS PIN HER. TURN YOURSELF IN AT ONCE. RIGHT, WE ARE NOT LEAVING UNTIL YOU SHOW YOURSELF. Ryan- Alright it was me. Cassie- HOW DARE YOU! Ryan- It was only a joke. God! Cassie- Not to me it wasn't. Report to Mr Burnett's office at once! Ryan- NO! (The whole class is shocked.) Next time on home and away: .What will happen with Ryan? . Why did Tony call Robbie? . Will Amanda admit she has a problem and how will Irene help her? I hope you like it.
Tasha Posted September 18, 2006 Report Posted September 18, 2006 Hey Dr Kim, i know you from HAAC And i've read this fic. Hehe, your posting it here now. Good on ya. Well i'll re-read it here Great start Please update soon
angel15784 Posted September 18, 2006 Report Posted September 18, 2006 Great Start please update soon its excellent how did beth die?>> what happened with amanda and the kids????
Guest Posted September 18, 2006 Report Posted September 18, 2006 Great Start please update soon its excellent how did beth die?>> what happened with amanda and the kids???? Oh my gosh I hope you didn't kill Beth,Lucas,Mattie,Kim and Tasha
dr kimberley Posted September 18, 2006 Report Posted September 18, 2006 ^^Beth is the only one out of those two that have died and she died of a brain hemeraige (How ever you spell it)
~Rosey~ Posted September 18, 2006 Report Posted September 18, 2006 That was really good Please udate soon.
dr kimberley Posted September 19, 2006 Report Posted September 19, 2006 Chapter 2 (Summer Bay High) Cassie- I beg your pardon? Ryan- I said No! Cassie- You will do as I tell you Ryan now go. Ryan- You can't make me. Pippa- Come on Ryan, just listen to Ms Turner. Cassie- It's ok Pippa I can handle it. ( Sally walks past) Sally- Is everything alright? Cassie- Ryan is refusing to go to Mr Burnett. Sally- What happened? Cassie- Ryan put a pin on my chair. Sally- Ryan that's not very nice. Why don't you come with me to the office? Ryan- Fine. ******************************************************************** (The gym) Drew- How can I help you Colleen? Colleen- I would like to buy a membership. Drew- Alright it is $200 per year. Colleen- Ok I'll pay in cash. (Colleen pulls $200 out of her purse) Drew- Here is your membership. Colleen- I'd like to start on the weights thanks. Drew- Why do you want to build up your muscles? Colleen- I have a wrestling match against Madge Wilking in a week. ******************************************************************** (Paris's office) Paris- Thank you for bringing Ryan in Sally. Sally- That's fine. (Sally walks out) Paris- Why did you put a pin on Ms Turners chair. Ryan- Because she is a cow! Paris- Watch your attitude Ryan! Ryan- Just telling it how it is. Paris- Your suspened for a week. Ryan- WHAT! Paris-(smirks) Just telling it how it is. ******************************************************************** (Tony and Robbie's house) Tony- I'm glad you came so fast. Robbie- Who would trash our house? Tony- Maybe the stalker. She's come back alive 10 times. Robbie- Oh god! (Jack arrives) Tony- Thanks for coming mate. Jack- It's fine. Do you know who could've done this? Tony- No idea. Robbie- I have no clue. Jack- Is there anything missing? Tony- Not that I can see. Except a picture of Robbie that hung on the wall. Jack- Ok we'll have to look around. ******************************************************************** (Amanda's house) Irene- Amanda open up! Amanda- Go away Irene. Irene- NO! You need help and i will not leave until you face it. Amanda- You will leave when I tell you. Irene- You are an alcaholic. I want to help you. Amanda- I am not an alcaholic now **** off! ******************************************************************** (Diner) Leah- How did you go? Irene- No good. She is very angry. We need to get someone who will be able to talk sense to her. (Dan walks in with Ryan) Leah- What are you doing from school early? Dan- Ryan has been suspended for a week. Leah- What? Why? Dan-He put a pin on Cassie's chair and then had an attitude about it. Leah- Ryan! That is not acceptab;e behaviour. Ryan- You'll get over it. Dan- Watch your mouth! Your are not going to stay home during you suspension. Ryan- Where am I going to go then? Dan- You're going to work at the diner isn't he Leah? Leah- Yep. Ryan- That is so unfair! Leah- Anyway, Dan we need your help. Dan- How? Leah- Amanda is drinking her sorrows away and is getting out of control. Dan- I'll se what I can do. ******************************************************************** (Hospital) Rachel- What a boring day. Nothing is happening. (Suddenly a bed comes in with Colleen in it) Rachel- What happened? Paramedic- Mrs Smart tried to lift weights but it was to much of a strain for her heart. Rachel- Put her in that room. Drew- Will she be alright? Next time on Home and away . Will Colleen survive? . Is Zoe back again? . What tradgedy happens in Summer Bay? . Can Dan get through to Amanda? . Which ex resident comes back and will they stay?
Tasha Posted September 19, 2006 Report Posted September 19, 2006 Awww...poor Colleen, i hope shes alright. Ryan is so naughty, and poor Amanda i think i know who trashed Tony and Rob's house, but i cant say coz it'll give it away Great chapter though PLeae update soon
Traceve Posted September 19, 2006 Report Posted September 19, 2006 omgness I love this fic!! Please post more soon!!
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