Psycho_Sis Posted September 3, 2006 Report Share Posted September 3, 2006 Shan your skills describing depression and sadness are amazing. i love the way you layout your story with emotional feelings someone is feeling because its understandable for the reader its awesome and so are you xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traceve Posted September 3, 2006 Report Share Posted September 3, 2006 Thanks for all the comments and Rachel thanks for saying im awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stefan Posted September 5, 2006 Report Share Posted September 5, 2006 hahah Yes! my video gets a fan fic as well! Oh yeah! Good job I like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traceve Posted September 5, 2006 Report Share Posted September 5, 2006 ^ omg! It was your awesome video that insipred me and I got that song that was on the vid, I love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traceve Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 Sorry it is short but for this fic I thought it would be better to do smaller chapters rather then long ones. Cassie had been hidden away in her bedroom for the past few hours. Sally had advised Ric, to stay away for a while and let her be by herself. Ric had taken her advice and done so. He was in his room, which was next-door to Cassie’s he could her here sobbing. He tried to block it out of his head but he couldn’t. Every time he closed his eyes and saw Flynn and heard him. But when his eyes were open all he could hear was Cassie sobbing. He couldn’t sit there at listen to her, his heart was breaking. “Cass?” Ric said softly as he tapped on her door. “Go away!” Cassie yelled out through her sobs. “Cass, please, just let me in,” Ric said softly he too was trying not to cry. “No!” Cassie screamed, “Just leave me alone!” Cassie quietened down as she heard Ric’s footsteps leave her doorway. She blinked her eyes making the tears leave her eyes and run down her cheeks. Deep Down she knew she had wanted Ric by her side at that moment. But she somehow couldn’t bring herself to saying it. “Ric,” She sobbed, as she cried harder and harder her sobs became louder. “Ric!” She was virtually screaming his name by this point. Ric heard her cries as he opened the door. “Cassie,” Ric said softly as he sat down on the bed next to her. He scooped her up in his arms and held her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swfc Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 It's really sad and emotional. Loving it heaps! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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