Guest Posted July 24, 2006 Report Share Posted July 24, 2006 The City Tony: Jack mate hurry up Because we don't want to be late Jack: I will come after you as i will drive Lucas: Can i come for the ride Jack Jack: No you are going with dad Tony: Ok you two it might be different when your Mum died but we have to do what is right Summer Bay Mattie: Mum i am going over to Cassie's ok Beth: No you are staying here and meet your new neigbours Mattie: Well so i will meet them later Beth: Ok bring Cassie if you want to Mattie: Yes ok see you Beth: Ok sweetie Diner Belle: Irene i need help with this customer Irene: Ok i will be right there darl Customer: Hurry up you little brat i am sick and tired of wating Belle: Ok just wait it won't be long now ok Irene comes over to Belle Irene: Ok what is it Customer: This girl not going quick Enough Irene: She only just work here ok Customer: Well people like you should be more responsible cause you are a bad person Belle: Hey don't you call her that you little cow Irene: Belle i think you need to lower your voice down Belle: Sorry Irene: Get out of here you little oldie or i will make you get out Customer: Well little F like you can leave or else i will get the police and arreasted you two The Customer is going but she pulls the Finger up at Irene and Belle Belle: Man i want to slap that evil cow Irene and Belle starts packing upn as it getting late The carpark House There a knock on the door Cassie: Oh hi Mattie Mattie: Hey um i was wondering if you like to stay the night Cassie: Well ok i will just ask Sally Cassie: Sal i am going to stay the night at Mattie's ok Sally: Ok The two gose back to Mattie's House The outside of the Hunter's House Beth: They are here are our new neigbours Mattie: Cool car Tony looking at Beth Tony: Hi i am Tony Holden and these are my two boys Jack Holden and Lucas Holden Beth: I am Beth Hunter and this is my Daughter Mattie and my Son Robbie who will be back tomorrow As the Holden starts unpacking their bags Beth ask if they need any help Beth now turn bright red Mattie: Mum we need to get back in the house or are you just going to look at that Tony guy Beth: Oh sorry um I will come in a minute End of Ep Will Beth find the man of her dreams ? Will Belle save the day in the diner ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stuart2006 Posted July 24, 2006 Report Share Posted July 24, 2006 good story please continue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted July 24, 2006 Report Share Posted July 24, 2006 Great start!! update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 25, 2006 Report Share Posted July 25, 2006 The Hunter House Beth is looking out the window but when she saw Tony she pretend to do dishes Mattie: Hi mum what are you up today Beth: Nothing really Mattie: are you just going to see this Tony guy Mum you are in love with him aye Beth: No i am not he just good looking that all Mattie sees Tony with no top on as Beth starts looking at Tony dreamly Beth: Woh he hunky i never see a man with huge muscles before Mattie: Urg yuck he way to old for you mum Beth: Mattie why dont you go and see Cassie or something Mattie: Ok see you have a good day As Beth continues to look at Tony doing a run she notice that Tony is in troble with a mad man Outside the streets Tony: Good moring Beth Beth: You to Man: Why don't you get your family out of here or i am calling the cops Beth: Excuse me dont say that to him Man: Ah pretecting him now aye Tony: Will just go away Beth: He just a nutter Tony: yeh did you want help with that lawn mower Beth: Oh maybe As Tony walks off to have a suf Beth gets her Cellphone and took a video of Tony running The Diner Belle is serving lunch as she notice the old lady from yesterday came in Belle: What are you doing here I thought my boss made it quite clear about not coming back to this diner Old Lady: Well brat i have call the cops on you and you are going to prison Belle: Well i will just tell them what really happed so little grout watch your back The old Lady rasie a wepon out of hand and fired a shot a Belle but it miss but however Belle got a bleeding head as she smash it hard on the floor Belle: Haha i got a pan so watch out for that heart of yours cause i will give you a heart attack with this Pan Old Lady: give it your best shot Irene comes in and dosn't see what happens Belle: Irene duck down but it was too late Irene was Shot in the leg Belle swings the pan right at the old lady and kill her with it as the old lady has a heart attack then collapes onto the floor Belle rush to Irene side Irene: Belle ring the hospital Belle: Ok The streets Beth is trying to make the Lawn Mower work Tony see Beth and he walks over to her Beth turns around and see Tony with no top again Tony: Hey want some help Beth: Ok it the Lawn Mower Tony: Sure As Beth watch Tony fixing the Mower Beth watches Tony's Muscles moving as Tony catch Beth looking at him Tony: Are you ok Beth: Um oh yeh do you want a a cup of coffee or something Tony: Sure As Beth walks off she slips in the mud as Tony runs over to her side Tony: Are you ok Beth: Yep i am will have to take my top now As Beth gose in side she takes her Bra off and put her Pink top on The Holden House Jack: Dad you know that Beth Chick are you going to ask her out Tony: Maybe if i like her Jack: Ok Will Beth And Tony have a date? Will Beth have a Pash with the Man of her Dreams? Will Irene get Cancer or a Heart Attack and will she be ok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 27, 2006 Report Share Posted July 27, 2006 The Hospital Irene is rush into operation room 20 min later Irene wakes up and wonders what happen Belle: Hey Irene are you ok Irene: Yeh i am so happy i didn't die Belle: Yeh i don't how i could tell Tasha and Robbie if that happens Irene: Yeh so what are you doing today Belle: Um nothing really Irene: How about if you take my keys from my handbag and drive the car here Belle: Woh but would i be able to drive it Irene: of cause you can you did it with Barry's Car Belle: Ok see you The Hunter House Mattie: Um mum Tony rang and see if you like to have a coffee with him Beth: Did he thanks sweetie i am going over there now Mattie: Mum have fun with a hot guy Beth: What ever The Holden House Tony: Hi Beth Beth: Hi so what do you want to do Tony: Um i was wondering if you like to go on a date with me Beth: Um Ok yes around about 7:00 as it will be dark Tony: Um sure The Hospital Irene is reading a book while Belle comes in Belle: Irene the car is ok but it was fun Irene: Glad you enjoyed it want to drive around in it Belle: Um ok if you are alright with that Irene: Cause i am wait Irene feels a pain in her heart Belle: Irene are you ok in the last second Irene has a massive Heart attack as Belle srecms for help Racheal comes running thourgh Racheal: Ok Irene i want you to breath for me Irene tried to breath but it is no help Nurse Julie: The life saver's Racheal: Yes Ok one two three up as Irene health meter is great Racheal: Phew only 2 minutes away from death Guys this is a short one but I will write an evan bigger one later on as I havn't decide what will come next ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 Still at the hospital Belle: Irene I need you The Hunter House Mattie: Woh you look hot today mum Beth: Thanks Mattie and I am hot enongh for a hot guy Mattie: Yep well have a good night Beth walk to next door The Holden House Tony: Woh Um Jack I am going now Jack: Ok have fun The Diner Tony: What do you want Beth: Um I will have a salad and fish Tony: That sounds nice I will have a burger Colleen: Ok what do you want Beth: Salad and fish Tony: A burgar Colleen: Oh that sounds so yummy The Hunter House Mattie Is watching an AO movie she starts to enjoyed It The beach Beth: That was a great Dinner thanks Tony Tony: That Ok Beth: Can I ask you something Tony: Sure Beth: Do you ever get cold Tony: Um not really Beth: Ok Beth Is looking at Tony's Muscles as they get a little bit bigger and Beth's Breast starts to enlagre Tony: Are you Ok Want to go for swim Beth: Um no thanks Tony: Ok I will be a little while oh yeh want to hold my top Beth: Yep Beth smells Tony top As Tony Is swimming Beth watches The look out Beth: It great Tony: Yeh It great Beth gose In the bush as she unzip her top untill she can she a bit of her bra Tony: Woh Beth look at you Beth: Me oh It ok Beth walks closer to Tony Beth: You know when we first meet I thought I found a good guy without a top on Tony: Yeh I liked you ever since I saw you Beth: Yeh I want to do something now something sexy Tony: You are one hottie around here As Beth and Tony lock In They have a Pash Beth: You are the best kisser ever you are so muscley Tony: Want to see them Beth: Oh yes I like a man that hunky like you want to see my breast Tony starts unziping Beth top like Beth did to Tony Beth: Can I touch that big muscle Tony: Coruse what about your breast Beth: Go on I need this one you are the hottest guy I have ever mentioned you make my breast bigger Tony: I can see that you are the sextist women I meet Beth: Can you make them bigger Tony: Um Ok Beth: Woh I want to lick them please It my fave part with a man like you Tony: Sure can I lick your Boobs Beth: Oh yeh man I love It want to sleep with me Tony: Ok Sexy Tony and Beth have a way hotter Passion together Will Irene find a man of her Dreams? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cake Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 Umm it's pretty good but you may want to fix your english a bit coz it's kinda hard to understand some of it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ciaobella Posted August 8, 2006 Report Share Posted August 8, 2006 ok that is a tiny bit weird Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.