sevenpuddings Posted April 11, 2006 Report Share Posted April 11, 2006 Woot. I can't wait for the party, and Ric and Belle interaction. I love how you've made her devious as she aims to get Ric's attention. Loved it. Can't wait for more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matty and luke forever Posted April 11, 2006 Report Share Posted April 11, 2006 That was great more please !!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted April 12, 2006 Report Share Posted April 12, 2006 Great so far. cant wait to see if Ric can resist her at the party. This is just how I would imagine Belle to think, well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xGlowingAngelx Posted April 12, 2006 Report Share Posted April 12, 2006 great fanfic, more soon please!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Platinum~Blonde Posted April 20, 2006 Report Share Posted April 20, 2006 Here's some more, sorry it takes me so long to update, I've been terribly busy! CHAPTER THREE: Girl Fight. When we arrive at the door, I can hear load music and lots of people making noise inside. I haven’t been to a decent party since the ones I used to sneak off to back home. I burst open the door and walk inside as if I’m the most confidant girl in the room. Cassie catches a glimpse of me and rolls her eyes. What the hell is she wearing? It’s a horrible combination of blue and bright yellow. “Did you get dressed in the dark?” I say without trying not to laugh. She was fuming so much she couldn’t open her mouth to reply. I shake my head and turn away from her, she’s not why I’m here. Problem is, I can’t see Ric anywhere, it’s really bothering me. I don’t know too many other people here and all there is to do is drink. I pick up a shot from a nearby tray going past me and down it in a moment. Several more later, I’ve almost forgotten why I’m here, I’m just having way to much fun dancing . Suddenly, I trip and fallen on my behind, the room is spinning and I’m laughing so hard I can’t get up. A hand outstretches to pull me up, I can’t see who it is through my blurry vision. I blink and try to focus. Suddenly I’m on my feet and staring into Ric’s eyes. I can’t help myself any longer, I pull him right in close to me and kiss him. He gives in and relaxes a little, I won’t let him pull away. In an instant though, we are pulled apart by force. Someone has grabbed my hair and pulled me to the ground. “Who the hell do you think you are!?” Screams Cassie, bright red with tears streaming down her face. Quickly, I’m back on my feet. “He wanted it just as much as I did”. I say with a grin, after all, he didn’t pull away now did he? With one fowl smack, she slaps me on the right cheek. It tingles and catches me by surprise. I actually laugh at the disbelief of the situation and retaliate with a push. Before I know it there are hits being made left right and centre and everyone is staring at us in disbelief. Someone I don’t recognise takes my arms behind my back and pulls me away from Cassie, whilst someone else does the same with her. She’s still kicking and abusing me whilst being dragged away. Suddenly, everything goes blurry again and I feel so sick. I run out the door and throw up in the garden. Everything is spinning and I feel so lost and vulnerable. Something sends me back to reality. I can hear Cassie and Ric not too far away arguing. “How could you do this to me!? With HER, she’s trash!” My blood starts to boil, how dare she! “I’m sorry Cas, she kissed me.” “ You didn’t try to stop her or pull away though, and I’ve told you for weeks that I don’t like how close you’ve let her get to you.” “Forget it, if you can’t trust me then we’re best to just put a stop to this right now.” I’m now standing just around the corner where I can see them, Ric storms off and Cassie throws herself onto the ground crying. I almost feel a little guilty at the part I’ve had to play in their demise, but I’m also ecstatic, now I can finally get what it is I really want, well one of the things I really want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sevenpuddings Posted April 20, 2006 Report Share Posted April 20, 2006 That was great. Loved the fight scene. Now we're left with the Belle and Ric hookup, although, my hunch tells me it's not going to be that simple. Can't wait for more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted April 20, 2006 Report Share Posted April 20, 2006 Fab, I think Ric really wants Belle, but as said before I get a feeling it wont be that easy. Cant wait to see what happens next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matty and luke forever Posted April 20, 2006 Report Share Posted April 20, 2006 I lve it well done !!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eden Posted April 21, 2006 Report Share Posted April 21, 2006 This is a GREAT Fan-Fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tashas angel Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 I liked it. it was a great read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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