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Fab chapter there having a baby A little Baby O'brien Tasha Update soon hun xxxxx

Seriously im gonna kill you Omg martha say no And Jack dont you dare propose update soon xxxx

Wahey Im Jacks one night stand I no you all hate me but I dont care (Got that line of friends) Update soon xxxxxxxx

Come on Shan We want an update with lots of JPness

Neither will I Well I will because I proof read it but hey! But noo Sam can come back but she cant get with Jack! Update soon

I cant believe you killed of my Ickle Martha You evil so mean Poor Leo wont have a mummy and Jack wont have a Wife Poor Leo and no Mummy *Cries sooo much* Evil I tell ya everyone Zetti is Evil when she comes on MSN shes gonna get it from me

Firstly Glad to know you will be continuing with your other fic Sencondly That was sooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!

Matilda how could you abuse Martha's trust Lucs told Jack Martha are you stupid! Our little Marthas not herself, we have to let this incident slip Fab chapter Amber!! Cant wait to see Jacks reaction towards her Knowing Jack it will be like " You do remember me dont you" Update soon xxxxxxxx

Hey that was a good chapter and poor Martha and Jack and Leo One thing though:- "I got here just before she shot Martha and she shot a hole in the carpet" How did Martha die!!!!!!

How could you leave it there Jacks gonna offer himself aint he Update ASAP xxxxxx

Great chapter (s) I sure do hope Martha tells Jack and they go on a date together Because Jack may get angry at Martha if he hears it from Luc Maybe Luc should tell Mac?? *ummm* Update soon hun xxx

What was that for what has Bobby done Update ASAP I think you should update now as I have to go in a few minutes and update with J&P Update soon Shan

Am so very upset Poor Lucus You should call the baby Lucus Anthony Holden Update soon hun xxxxx

You didt just leave it there no way Update ASAP Fabby chapter and you told me it was crap it was fab!

Poor Jack Nic you can send him my ways That was soo good You should update ASAP Great chapter hunni

Wow! Im confused by that letter though This is Fab considering you cant write one shots This is soo good You really should continue I feel so sorry for Martha!

:O You did not just end it there Update now

Come on Update please I have to go to work in like 30mins and I want to read an update pleaseeeee xxxxxxxxxxxx

Omg You need to update ASAP

I did help pick the name? My memorys like a sive without the holes (Credit to Laura for the saying) Great chapters update soon xxxxx

Wahey another flashback Go and pounce of Jacky Mac I dont think he'll mind Update soon Amber

Whats he done If you want to send me your next chapter ill proof it for you Update soon xxxxxx