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LAURZY!

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  1. oooo LOVE the last line!!! i so wanna know whats gonna happen at that party Great update, whats Geoff hiding?
  2. This is really good!! i love how you use the flashbacks I hope Nicole and Geoff talk soon Hope Aden comes back soon! Great update
  3. oooo liked it, i agree with Taniya, i love how the characters have one similar interest, yet are coming from a different angle (it made sense in ym head lol, just couldnt word it properly! lol) Basically, i thought it was good! Looking forward to the next update
  4. loved it!! And he bought books AND chocolate, that boy does know a way to a girls heart lol Great update hun, that was fantastic
  5. thats pretty much it!!! That was so so good, really glad they talked and sorted everything out I love how long your chapters are Fantastic update
  6. oooo like it! 1 question....none of them are together? Cant wait to read more
  7. OMG!!! Hope the babies ok!?! Really well written hun, great update
  8. Something felt right about it to me lol it was great Very sweet Although i really hope Aden doesn't go to jail Great update
  9. Awww that was so good loved the warning at the beginning Love his text, and the fact he sent it to her!! Loved it all
  10. That was really good! Poor Belle Poor Aden!! hope they talk soon Great update as per
  11. That was the best chapter ever!! granted theres only been 3 lol but it was I liked that Belle made the effort to get to know them, and the end bit with Geoff was so sweet! Absolutely loved it cannot wait for the next update
  12. I rec Belle will be ok, she's just really scared which is only natural i think!! I did think you were gonna reveal the proposel lol awww i bet it was dead romantic Great update
  13. you killed him!!!!! Awww she named the baby after them both Its been an absolute pleasure to read, cant wait to read more of your stuff, thanks for writing it
  14. That was gorgeous!!! I just love how your able to write their emotions and thoughts in so much detail Really great update
  15. He better survive!! lol i hope he does! Cant believe there's only 1 chapter left!! Loved it
  16. Maria can seriously just do one!! Awww Justin! - i know its sadistic but i did kinda smile when i first read it Great update hun, cant believe it's nearly over
  17. I dont think raining does the weather here much justice!!! more like a storm!!
  18. Awwww Belle and Aden's baby died?? thats so sad! That was really well written Great update
  19. Right...i think im getting the gist of some things now! i just wanna know what happened with Aden and Belle!! I can totally see why Geoff would be off with Nicole if Aden broke Belle's heart! Cant wait for the next update, im intrigued!
  20. I quite liked the ending!! i did think they were gonna get together, but i liked the fact that they'd both got on with their lives It's been a pleasure to read, looking forward to reading more of your stuff
  21. What's going through Belle's head?!?! Great fluffy chapter, ice cream does sound quite good right now lol Great update hun, looking forward to reading more
  22. Awww it was great that it was Belle opening up to Aden instead of the other way round!! Great update
  23. Do not like Maria!! lol news?!? what news - is it bad enough for them to break up?? hahahaha Great update, cant wait for the next update, wanna know who dies
  24. WOW that was amazing!! your writing is unreal! loved the dialogue! It had me in tears, and it had me laughing! Brill update, looking forward to the next chapter, like the sound of the sneak peek
  25. Awwww poor Geoff! and poor Belle I love how your writing this, very good!! Great update, looking forward to reading more
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