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I thought they were setting up a eating disorder storyline for Hunter at the end of last year but it never happened, this is my take on if it did.

Story Title: The Waves Hit
Type of story: Short Fic
Main Characters: Hunter, Olivia, Zac, Irene, Leah, VJ
BTTB rating: T/A
Genre: Drama/Family/Romance/General
Does story include spoilers: Yes
Any warnings: Violence.
Summary: Hunter has just been dumped by Olivia and is a mess but what if he devloped an eating disorder during this time? how would that affect him? and would anyone realise before its too late?

Chapter 1:

The Beach

Hunter is running on the beach when Zac find him

Hunter: hey
Zac: how are you this morning?
Hunter: you know powering though
Zac: you are ok right?
Hunter: why wouldn't I be?
Zac: you've been exrecising alot latley and you didn't eat dinner last night
Hunter: dad seriously I am fine.. I just want to be healthy
Zac: ok but no more skipping meals
Hunter: what ever you say
Zac: good, I'll see you later
Hunter: bye

Summer Bay House

Zac and Leah are chatting

Leah: so did you talk to Hunter?
Zac: yeah and he says he is fine
Leah: are you sure?
Zac: no but he just got dumped by Olivia, maybe he needs more time
Leah: yeah maybe
Zac: I am worried about him
Leah: only natural
Zac: I'm sure he'll be fine

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Great idea for a story! I was really hoping that they were going to explore this with him. They dropped the story like a hot potato when they tried it with Oscar a few years ago and I've always felt that that was such a cop out. Hunter having an eating disorder would be understandable given what he's been through and how little control he feels he has over his life. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this!

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On 2/2/2017 at 4:36 PM, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Interesting start to this fanfiction. Looking fowards to the next chapter 

 

On 2/2/2017 at 5:01 PM, Kristen said:

Great start.

I can't wait to read more.

Update again soon :)

 

On 2/2/2017 at 10:01 PM, Ludub said:

Great idea for a story! I was really hoping that they were going to explore this with him. They dropped the story like a hot potato when they tried it with Oscar a few years ago and I've always felt that that was such a cop out. Hunter having an eating disorder would be understandable given what he's been through and how little control he feels he has over his life. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this!

Thanks guys, next chapter will be up soon, sorry for the long wait.

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Chapter 2:

The Gym

Hunter and VJ are working out together

VJ: so are you doing okay?
Hunter: why does everyone seem to think I'm not okay
VJ: maybe because you aren't coping?
Hunter: I'm fine
VJ: yeah sure you are
Hunter: seriously if you don't want to hang out just say, we don't have to be here
VJ: well lets go somewhere and talk properly then
Hunter: fine if it will shut you up
VJ: hey I'm trying to be your friend here
Hunter: your not doing a good job
VJ: yeah like your prefect, you've barely been around for me latley
Hunter: yet here we are arguring about that
VJ: maybe if you actually act like a human for once
Hunter: I am Human and I am fine
VJ: you know what, your on your own, don't blame me anymore for your problems
VJ walks away
Hunter: don't worry I won't

Summer Bay House

VJ enters the house

Billie: your back early?
VJ: yeah well Hunter was being annoying
Billie: you could give him a break?
VJ: why bother? hes being so stupid
Billie: hes clearly suffering and all your doing is letting him push you away
VJ: why is it up to me?
Billie: because your his friend
VJ: yeah I know, I should be helping him
Billie: good, glad you figured that out
VJ: what would I do without you?
Billie: no I'm the lucky one, you stayed and you didn't have too
VJ: hey were both lucky

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Great chapter. I appreciate that VJ's frustrated about not being able to help but I think he needs to take a more subtle approach since Hunter's so clearly on the defensive. He obviously feels like he's being attacked from all angles. Billie and VJ were sweet and I'm glad she talked some sense into him. Looking forward to the next chapter x

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On 2/9/2017 at 8:43 PM, Ludub said:

I appreciate that VJ's frustrated about not being able to help but I think he needs to take a more subtle approach since Hunter's so clearly on the defensive. He obviously feels like he's being attacked from all angles. Billie and VJ were sweet and I'm glad she talked some sense into him.

 

On 2/10/2017 at 5:24 AM, Kristen said:

Liked VJ trying to help Hunter and be a supportive friend.

Good Billie talked some sense into VJ.

 

14 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Loved how VJ is trying to be a good friend to Hunter

Liiked how Billie talked some sense into VJ

Yes VJ is trying to help but maybe he needs a different way to do it & Billie gave VJ some good advice. Next chapter will be up either tonight or tomorrow. Thanks you guys for reading.

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