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I would copy and paste the whole thing coz i LOVED it but i chose not to.

I loved every bit of the update Danni. How descriptive you've been-everything.

I :lol: at Angelo's 'I dont want to break her' bit, i can see why he'd be like that.

And when Chloe was put on Charlie's and then Angelo's chest for the bonding :wub: I was like *sniff* -very emotional. Perfect

And now Chalrie has said to Angelo about Shelly's apology, maybe now these two will finally be all :wub: again, like they were before.

I loved this chapter Danni, and can't wait to read the next one :D

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Oh Danni that was lovely! I'm so glad they finally got to hold her, and Angelo would have regretted it if he didn't go back in. And now it looks like things are looking up for them as a couple :D hopefully the two of them spending so much time with Chloe will really help their relationship as they help each other cope with everything. I had to laugh at Angelo's reaction to the word Shelly :lol: I don't think he would ever believe she had apologised! Great update as usual :)

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Great Update!!!

Loved that they got to hold Chloe, even though it wasn't for long they still got a chance to bond with their daughter. I loved how Angelo was worried to hold her as he didn't want to break her.

Update Soon!!!

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Amazing updates!

Chapter 80 - I'm so glad that Charlie and Angelo will be able to hold Chloe soon. :D That's good that Shelly apologised to Charlie, she seemed sincere too so hopefully she'll just leave and Charlie will be able to move on.

Chapter 81 - Aww, I loved the Changelo moments and when they got to hold Chloe. :wub:

Looking forward to the next chapter. :D

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:D I really loved this update!

Poor Ava, thinking she had done something to cause the machine to beep :( bless her. But it was so cute that she wanted to hold Chloe and that she listend so carefully to what Erin told her. I'm glad Chloe is alright, but, I feel for Charlie and Angelo, not knowing if Chloe is going to be brain damaged. I hope she isnt.

Ben! Bless him, mising his mummy. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

And Ruby :o Pregnant! and she's thinking about and abortion! Charlie and Ruby really are alike :P I hope she doesn't go through with it -for the reasons Charlie said, But, the test could be wrong, so.....Ruby may not actually be pregnant. Either way, its a great read :D

More soon Danni, Please

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Chapter 76: I can totally understand Ben’s reaction as it all happened to me when I was very little. I fell in a pool and was terrified of water afterwards but it didn’t last for long though. How excited were the boys when Jack told them they could drive the boat and when Ben caught some fish!

Shelly is a b****! She ruined Angelo and Charlie’s marriage and she just keeps reminding Charlie! But she did offer her help when Charlie was in labour. So she’s not totally awful! I hope the baby’ll be alright! Of course, it had to happen when Angelo is at sea and doesn’t have a signal!

Chapter 77: I love how excited Ben was when he told Charlie all about their fishing trip!

Poor Charlie! She’s still very emotional. It’s not her fault if she gave birth before Angelo could come to her. If the baby decided to come at that moment, it wouldn’t have been possible to stop her. I like how Angelo tried to make Charlie feel better even though he’s worried about his baby daughter.

I can’t believe Shelly’s reaction with Angelo. You’d think she would have become nicer after saving their baby. Thank God, Erin is really nice!

I wonder why Ben doesn’t want to see his little sister. Ava is happy to see her. It was really nice of her to bring the teddy bear. I love the way she asked all those questions to Erin.

Chapter 78: Charlie should have told Angelo from the start that she didn’t like the name. I’m glad Ruby did though. My first thought had been that they should keep Antonia as a middle name and that’s what Charlie decided. I love the name Chloe.

I like Ruby and Angelo’s relationship. He may not be her biological father but they still get along so well. It’s nice of Ruby to be there for Angelo just like he has been there for her.

:o The end! I hope Chloe will be alright! Poor Charlie and Angelo!

Chapter 79: Poor Chloe! She’s only a few days old and she’s got through so much already. I really hope she’ll be alright.

I love the chat between Rachel and Charlie. Rachel being a doctor must be very reassuring as she knows what she is talking about when it comes to medical stuff

Chapter 80: I totally understand how frustrated Charlie and Angelo must be. Not knowing what exactly is wrong with your daughter must be so awful. Thankfully, Erin had some good news!

Oh no Shelly is back! Why does she want to get back at Charlie for Grant anyway? Now she finally knows how bad Grant really was. I doubt Shelly would have wanted that to happen to her instead. She apologised, I just hope she’ll leave them alone from now on.

Chapter 81: I’m glad Charlie decided to put the past behind them and move on.

Aw they finally got to hold Chloe. That was such a sweet scene. It was Charlie’s turn to reassure Angelo now. As Charlie said, Erin wouldn’t let them hold the baby if she wasn’t ready for it.

Chapter 82: Poor Ava! She was so excited at the thought of getting to touch the baby and then Chloe stopped breathing. I see why she’s scared now. That would be very scary for a little girl! I had to laugh when the nurse said Ava was telling Chloe all about High School Musical though.

Yay Charlie finally got to go home! Too bad, Chloe couldn't go as well.

Oh no Ruby is pregnant with Jay's child. Like Charlie said, she should have used protection but I don't think Charlie should have picked that moment to tell her though. I understand why Ruby wants an abortion but Charlie got raped and kept the baby so she knows what she's talking about when she says Ruby will probably love it.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :D

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Oh my goodness Ruby :o:o I thought for sure it would be negative!!! Oh dear, this complicates things so much! I wonder how Angelo will react :huh: and Gina would be devestated. The scene in the hospital was so cute with Ava, I hope Chloe is ok in the long run, she's been through enough. And yayy Charlie is home, loved Ben's reaction. But oh my goodness Ruby :o

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Great Update!!

Glad Charlie is out of hospital even though she feels guilty about leaving Chloe, she needs to see her other children as well.

Poor Ruby getting pregnant by her husbands killer, wonder what she will do?

Update Soon!!!!!

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Fantastic chapter! :D

Poor Ava thinking she had done something to cause the machines to start beeping. :( I can understand why she wanted to leave.

That's great that Charlie can go home but it's a shame Chloe can't.

Omg, Ruby's pregnant. :o I wonder whether she will go through with the abortion or not.

Can't wait for the next chapter. :D

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