I'll Always Be Here (by Danni02) - comments

[Sabrina]

Poor Charlie. It must have been really hard for her to tell Ruby about Jay.

I feel so sorry for Ruby. Hopefully she'll talk to someone soon.

Aww, Ava was so sweet talking to Peanut.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

[Barbara]

Great chapter!

Poor Ruby! I feel so sorry for her. Finding out you slept with the man who killed your husband must be so awful. As if she hadn't enough on her mind already... Maybe she just wants to be alone right now to let everything sink in. Angelo is right; she'll talk to Charlie when she's ready.

The scene with Ava talking to her baby sister was so sweet! If Ava has her way, Peanut will be HSM obsessed as well!

More please

[carywary]

Awk no, do those two ever stop fighting? I hope that Angelo finds out what's bothering Charlie so that they can sort things out and get back to normal, cos the kids are getting involved and it's not fair. Oh and I'm glad Ruby came home and didn't run away Cute scenes with the kids, really liked it, you wrote the fighting well!

[callyha]

Danni Loved it!

I really hope this is the last arguement Charlie and Angelo have because now its affecting all the kids, and its not fair on them.

Ruby wants Charlie to tell her whats bothering her, which is so sweet, but Charlie is right, its something Ruby doesn't need.

Poor Ava been snapped at, I'm sure Charlie didn't mean to snap, and hopefully Charlie can talk to Ava and sort things out.

I and felt so sorry for Ava and Ben after Charlie snapped, their reactions were so cute and you wrote the fighting so well.

Ben drawing a picture for Ava was so sweet, these kids are just so adorable

Can't wait for the next update!

Ps, your welcome

[Rach Loves H&A]

Great Update!!!

Really hope Charlie and Angelo are going to stop arguing soon, its not good on the the baby and children.

I hope Charlie reveals what is wrong before she does say something she will regret.

Update Soon!!!!

[Laura]

I have finally caught up! It's really good! Hope Ruby starts getting over everything soon and I want to read what is Charlies problem with Angelo. Cant wait to read some more

[callyha]

RUBY CALLED HIM DAD, RUBY CALLED HIM DAD!!!!!! awwwwwwwwwwwwww

I LOVED Ruby and Angelo's chat! So sweet! and I'm glad they've talked about what happened with Ben and how Angelo was stupid for putting that ultimatum on Charlie.

So glad Ruby was able to talk to Angelo, and that comment that Ruby is as much Angelo's daughter as Ava and Peanut are was just so, !

I'm loving how their relationship is developing now, and now that's needed if for the arguing between Charlie and Angelo to stop. Maybe Ruby could help there!

Danni, this was such a great chapter, loved the chat, it was great

More soon please

And your welcome xx

[Rach Loves H&A]

Great Update!!!

Loved the chat between Angelo and Ruby, now that they have sorted out their problems its one less problem in the house. Hopefully Angelo can get to the bottom of whats wrong with Charlie in your next update.

Update Soon!!!!!

[carywary]

Oh my goodness that was so beautiful, I could cry just reading it! And she called him Dad, yayy! Normally when she calls him dad it's when she's talking to Ava and Ben but in that moment it was just beautiful! I'm such a big fan of Angelo and Ruby, I love it when they get wee moments like this, and it's so good that Ruby feels she can talk to him, and vice versa. It's nice that Angelo was able to share his marital problems with Ruby, cos they do involve her, so hopefully he will feel better having spoken to her about it. Oh and it was lovely when he said she was his daughter just as much as Ava and Peanut wow! Aw it was just so beautiful, one of my favourite chapters I think! I hope that this is kind of like a new beginning for them, they can put the Ben stuff behind them and forget it ever happened, and move forward with a closer relationship than ever. Beautiful, you are an amazing writer, the emotion was perfect

[Barbara]

Charlie and Angelo are fighting again! I hope Angelo is wrong and Charlie still loves him. Maybe it's just her hormones talking. She is pregnant after all. I hope she'll open up and talk to Ruby and/or Angelo. I didn't like how she yelled at Ava.

The chat between Ruby and Angelo was great and very well-written. Poor Ruby! She has been feeling guilty for so long. It's definitely not her fault. People argue and say stuff they don't mean all the time. Of course, Xavier knew she loved him. Jay is the one who is responsible for Xavier's death and he deserves to be locked up. I love the end when they both said 'I love you'.

More please.