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Great updates! :D

Chapter 35 - I loved the conversation between Charlie and Martha. It's nice how Martha is there for Charlie. :) I liked Ruby and Jay's date - Jay seems to be a nice guy. I feel sorry for Ruby. She obviously wants to move on but at the same time she doesn't seem to be ready.

Chapter 36 - Ruby and Charlie have such a great relationship - it's nice how they can talk to each other about anything. I'm glad Charlie and Angelo talked things through. Hopefully Angelo will be able to win back Charlie's trust eventually. :)

Looking forward to the next update. :D

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Brilliant! I thought it was funny when Charlie mentioned Martha and now Ruby knows there is something, I wonder if she'll drag it out of her? I loved Charlie's reaction when she saw the double bed and the "just stay on your side" comment :wub: Oh my goodness Angelo and Martha!! :o I didn't see that one coming. And Charlie said that one day she'll move in to Angelo's place and she wants to get back together with him :D I hope the rest of the weekend goes as well! Loved this chapter!

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Great chapters. Liked the chat between Charlie and Martha and glad that Ruby may have found a nice guy. Really pleased that Charlie is working things through with Angelo, hopefully things will start to get better for them now. Update soon!! :)

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I've finally caught up.

I love the little chat between Martha and Ava. It shows that even though parents try to hide their relationship issues from their children, they still pick up on them. And Ava knows that Angelo is the one who made Charlie sad. She's clever. I liked her trick to get Charlie and Angelo talking again. And it worked. :)

I also liked Martha and Charlie's chat. It also made her realise she really needed to talk to Angelo.

It looks like Charlie and Angelo have talked things through a bit. Hopefully, Angelo will be able to regain her trust but he will have to work hard for it. :) And he'd better not mess up again. <_<

I like Jay. He seems to be a nice and understanding guy.

More please.

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I really liked that first scene with Angelo and Charlie. I thought it was really sweet of Angelo to go out and get Charlie some peanut butter at 4am. Bless him not knowing which she liked so getting both kinds. I really liked that part where she started thinking of her baby, very nicely written. I really liked the scene with Ruby,Jay,Ava,Ben and Callum. Poor Ben for being on the naughty step. I really like Jay and I liked the way he was with the kids. I think he could be really good for Ruby. Poor Ben still wetting the bed and Charlie worrying something was wrong when she found out Ruby called. Poor Charlie not wanting anyone to see her burns and then thinking Angelo was only being nice to get in her good books again.

Looking forward to your next update :D

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Danni! *Give BIG BIG hug*

I loved this update! All of it!

Jay is so lovely, Ben and Ava are so cute.

And Angelo and Charlie :wub: Still so much love there!

I loved the beginning with the peanut butter craving, :lol:

And I loved how Angelo was assuring Charlie that the burns didn't change her in any way.

More soon please Danni, I LOVE this fic!!! xxx

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This Jay has me intrigued,

he seems way too laid back and I dont think I fully trust him yet :huh:

Ruby the supernanny there with the naughty step! Brought forth a little grin :wink:

Amazeballs :)

- Sam!

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Wow Danni, such a beautiful chapter! This has got to be one of my favourites :D

I loved the way Angelo would go to the supermarket at 4am just to get Charlie some peanut butter, both types! :wub: Loved the naughty step bit, and cheeky Ava asking Jay how long he'd have to spend there :lol: And Ava was so sweet asking why Charlie went away with Angelo if she didn't love him. I loved how Angelo told Charlie that she was so beautiful despite her burns :wub: Although I wish she could have got the word husband out. They're making a lot of progress this weekend so far and Charlie has started to think about the baby and what it will be like :D I LOVED this chapter so much!!!

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