I'll Always Be Here (by Danni02) - comments

[Laura158]

Awww Charlie might feel something for the baby!

You had me worried that she had terminated the baby while Angelo was shouting at her!!

Great Work!!

I love this fiction so much and can't wait until they (hopefully) get back together!

[Barbara]

Thankfully Charlie didn't go through with it. And she is finally starting to feel something for her baby! Things are improving a little. Angelo is right though: they really need to talk. The sooner, the better.

The end was really sweet and perfect!

More please.

[Chester-Sam]

What is wrong with me I was hoping she'd have the termination!

It's nice that she decided not to on her own though instead of Angelo stomping his feet

Keep it up rockstar,

- Sam!

[callyha]

Great update Danni!

How cute was Ava with Angelo at the beginning? with the dolls! So adorable!

Ben and Ava are so cute not wanting Changelo to be apart, I love how they want them to get back together -I hope they do soon!-

Hope nothing is really wrong with Charlie!

And is Jay a love interest for Ruby???? Hope so, Ruby could do with a little more happiness

More soon please Danni! This was great!

[Chester-Sam]

Oh dear, what's up with the baby?

How would she feel if she loses it now

Jay is interesting.. and a bit strange..

Update soon! I'm an addict

- Sam!

[freckleface]

Aaaw Ava's so cute

Of course Angelo would know what her favourite dolls are ;)

Poor Angelo though, you just know that his promise is going to backfire back at him :/

Uh-oh I hope Charlie's okay!

More soon please

xx

[mellbell86]

Another great update, Danni!

How adorable is Ava. All that talk about High School Musical and wanting the dolls, then questioning her dad on different things. So cute! Little Ben too. You write them so well. I really enjoy having them in the story, it is such a nice touch. I hope Angelo's promise to the kids comes true and Charlie will live there soon enough with them all as a family. It would be nice to see them all back together again, although it's going to take a lot of time especially after what Angelo did. I hope Charlie gives him some talking time soon.

What a cliff-hanger! What's wrong with Charlie? I hope it's not the baby. The poor girl needs a break. It's one thing after another. I hope she's alright and gets some kind of happiness soon. The relationship between Charlie and Ruby is special. I'm glad they have each other and maybe Ruby can talk a little bit of sense into her mum soon even if it's just to talk about her feelings or whatever. Anyway, I hope Charlie is ok.

Thanks for the update. I'm really enjoying it. Can't wait for more xxx

[Barbara]

Ava is a huge High School Musical fan, isn't she? And Angelo even knows the characters' names! How sweet!

The house looks like a nice place to live. Hopefully, they'll all be reunited and live there together someday.

Jay seems to be a nice guy. I don't think going on a date would hurt Ruby if she is ready for it. I don't think she should rush things though.

Oh no! What's wrong with Charlie? I hope she'll be okay.

More please.

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Poor Charlie. Hope she will be okay

Update soon please x

[Laura158]

Great update

I don't think Angelo should have promised Ava and Ben that him and Charlie were going to get back together... I think it might cause trouble later on.

But Ava was being sooo cute I might have done the same thing!

I liked the conversation between Ruby and Jay and hope they form a friendship

Oh nooo! Charlie! I hope she's okay...