whats occuring Posted May 18, 2008 Report Share Posted May 18, 2008 Name:CINDARALA TALE Type: probally a long fing if you like it Main Characters: annie and deeno <new guy> and many more BTTB Rating: G/A Genre: Love, Romance, Drama and a little violence Any Warnings: only that there are a couple of words and hitting used...not much though...and LOT romance... Spoilers: annie can't take being a kid and fells she has grown up . she gets herself to a party with melody and soon she meets deeno . they kiss not knowing each other names Summary: This fic is based on romeo and juilet and a bit of cindarala but is a modern interpitation with my favoirte character ANNIE HOPE YA ENJOY PART ONE ANNIE:why can't i be treated just the same as belle (belle walks in ) GEOFF:cause ........... BELLE:cause you can't (as she leaves) IRENE:you see annie you can't go to a party with alchol .it isn't good for ya and ya far too young . i'm sorry girly .no is NO GEOFF:hey and we can watch some videos if you want ANNIE:NO i don't want to (she runs out ) geoff and ireane sigh at each other (at the dinner ) ANNIE:please come melody ,please MELODY :no, i'm sorry i don't think is a good idea and by the way my mum would kill you ANNIE:you meant to be my mate . i helped you get over geoff please this one little thing for me please MELODY: why do you want to go anywhy ANNIE : it doesn't matter YOU COMING OR WHAT ? MELODY : i guess so but we have to be out of there by 12 o clock ANNIE :(excitedly) yeh i promise by 12 WILL BE CONTINUED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maccaz Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 Interesting... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 I like it Wonder what'll happen in the party? Only thing is the chapters should be longer. That's all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whats occuring Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 THE NEXT BIT OF THE CINDARALA TALE HOPE YOU ENJOY IT Name:CINDARALA TALE Type: probally a long fing if you like it Main Characters: annie and deeno <new guy> and many more BTTB Rating: G/A Genre: Love, Romance, Drama and a little violence Any Warnings: only that there are a couple of words and hitting used...not much though...and LOT romance... Spoilers: annie can't take being a kid and fells she has grown up . she gets herself to a party with melody and soon she meets deeno . they kiss not knowing each other names Summary: This fic is based on romeo and juilet and a bit of cindarala but is a modern interpitation with my favoirte character ANNIE HOPE YA ENJOY PART TWO GEOFF:(knocking annie's door) are you ok ? seriosly annie are you fine? ANNIE:(putting on her cloths ) yes ,yes i'm fine( tripping over some stuff) i just wanna sleep please GEOFF:fine (as he hit his fiest on the door) (down stairs at irene's place) GEOFF: what going on with her i mean we were soo close now is like she's a different person? IRENE: it's called growing , everyone's been through it (she looks at geoff ) trust me GEOFF: but it's like she is ignoring me IRENE: i know , but we can't do anything about it . i'm sorry she just needs time (annie's room ) annie sits at the side of her bed waiting suddenly a knock at the window MELODY:come on then before some one sees us ANNIE : i thought you would never come MELODY: i'm here now so ya coming or what ANNIE: ya i'm coming (leaning over the window) MELODY:come on annie comes down the window and soon meets melody at the ground ANNIE:so you worked out how we gonna get there MELODY : yes look there ANNIE :NO OH MY GOD it's a scoter MELODY : yes i know cool right ANNIE: we are gonna have such a great time MELODY : but we better be out there by ........... ANNIE: ya i know by 12 at the party MELODY : are you sure about this ANNIE : (gets an excitment in her eyes) YES OF COURSE MELODY: fine stay next to me than ANNIE: ya ya what ever wondering off more and more people walk side to side and soon annie got lost .she sees a boy pouring alchol it at the drinks but that isn't what cought her eyes .the boy who was getting the alchol in . they looked at each other for a long time. soon some one grabbes annie hand . not welling to let go she turned around MELODY:annie , i thought you said that you would stay next to me ANNIE: yah yah (still fixed to the boy ) melody want on speaking untill annie lost sight of the boy MELODY: so is this a party or what ?(seeing that annie was not intersted she answers herself) drink THE DRINKS ANNIE : ohhhhhh i'll get it as she starts getting the drink she fells someone touch her legs . she quickly turns around . it was the boy BOY: i wouldn't drink that if i was you . you wouldn't know where you would end up tonight ANNIE: i don't get you (leaning back tring to push hime BOY: (he leans even closer ) i mean you wouldn't wanna end up at his bed would ya (pointing at one of the boys ANNIE: ( pushes him away ) i not gonna end up at anyones bed BOY: ya seem sure ( he smiles at her ) ANNIE: i'm not i'm sure (she gives a smile and works pass ) he grabes her arm BOY: it seems you like to stearing i mean i wouldn't mind me stearing at you but true fellings can't hurt anyone (as he touches her hair ) ANNIE : true fellings as in what ? BOY: love the boy pushes her to a coner and they start kissing soon after that ,annie closes the curtains of the part they were in, and start kissing again . but this don't go on for long because melody flings the curtains open MELODY:come on it's time (grabbing annie's arm) ANNIE :(gets dragged by melody) BOY:whats your name? but no one answers because annie has allready gone the boy furiously closes the curtain again MELODY:(still running) what the hell where you doing ? i mean do you know him . him might aswell be a drug dealer for all you know ANNIE : (tring to keep up) please don't tell irene and anyway i am gonna get enough griff from her MELODY: (still runnig ) you still haven't answered my question yet so what were you doing ? ANNIE: i really think he is nice . i mean there was chamistry between us (she slows down and then stops running) MELODY : WHAT chemistry ? ANNIE : you just don't understand back to the party the boy starts walking to the entrance and spotes the shoe that annie was wearing he pickes it up and walks on. back at irene's annie tries to sneak in IRENE: so where have you been girly ANNIE: no ... no ..nowhere IRENE: you want whan i said not to go o the party ANNIE: but you don't understand IRENE : UNDERSTAND WHAT MISSY< i wouldn't understand if i lived to be 100, who want with you or where you on your own? ANNIE:no .... no ok i was with melo........... ops IRENE : you brought poor melody into this aswell get upstairs we're talk about it in the morning ANNIE : i was going upstairs anyway back at the party 3 boys leave the party one of which the boy that kissed annie <key this boy is refeared as boy 1 the other two are boy2 and boy3> BOY3: sooooo what were you doing deeno with that girl BOY2:yah don't think we haven't noticed BOY1: what did i do? BOY3:COME ON MATE.........don't start playing games since when have you not told us a thing (as he touches boy1's hair) they soon reach the carpark and 3 motor bike stand infront of them BOY2:soo where are we off to deeno BOY1: to an old mate in sumerbay ............. WILL BE CONTINUED QUESTION WHY SUMERBAY? WHO'S THE OLD FRIEND? IS ANNIE REALLY IN LOVE ? AND WHO ARE THE OTHER NEW CHARACTER? AND CAN THIS CHANGE SUMMERBAY? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maccaz Posted May 19, 2008 Report Share Posted May 19, 2008 Good chapter. Can't wait for the next part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.