kaciexox Posted December 19, 2007 Report Posted December 19, 2007 Awsome, love it already I love the dynamics to JM's relationship, very well written update soon Quote
*caitie* Posted December 19, 2007 Report Posted December 19, 2007 poor Lucas getting bossed around by his brother!!!Yay Martha for sticking up for him!!!great start!!!!! Quote
holden_girl9051 Posted December 20, 2007 Report Posted December 20, 2007 jack and martha are so cute can't wait for the next chapter please update soon Quote
Barbara Posted December 21, 2007 Report Posted December 21, 2007 Great start. I love Jack and Martha's relationship! They're cute. I like the fact that Summer Bay is a small rural farming community in this fic. The end of the 2nd chapter doesn"t sound good. Please update soon. Quote
*caitie* Posted January 1, 2008 Report Posted January 1, 2008 great update!!uh oh poor Beth and Tony !!Update soon Quote
sarahandkatie Posted January 4, 2008 Report Posted January 4, 2008 OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS!!!! PLease update soon, I love the song lyrics, the way you've used them, it has sooooooooo much meaning, I fel a small tear in my eye, I love that song tooo, can't wait for the nex installment! Quote
Barbara Posted January 4, 2008 Report Posted January 4, 2008 Chapter 3: Poor Tony, Beth and Jack! But they still have love. Chapter 4: Jack and Martha kissed. It was about time. I loved the lyrics too. More please. Quote
holden_girl9051 Posted January 10, 2008 Report Posted January 10, 2008 loved it jack and martha are so cute schoolies hey i can't wait for that great chapter please update soon Quote
amybabyy.x3 Posted January 10, 2008 Report Posted January 10, 2008 OMG!! i LOVED this chapter and the whole story schoolies?? should be interesting.... please update ASAP thnx :D Quote
Barbara Posted January 10, 2008 Report Posted January 10, 2008 I liked Martha's speech. Jack and Martha are so cute. “Men... Just like a good stiletto, great for a while but then they turn ugly and hurt.” ^ Please update soon. Quote
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