A Forbidden Love (by matty and luke forever) - comments

[sevenpuddings]

Aww Julie, that was great. And even though you've started out with the Ric/Maddie pairing, I really dont know who will end up with who, because of their alcohol induced states. And I can't wait for the next chapter, which promises drunken revelations, my favourite thing. Can't wait for more.

Edited January 23, 2016 by QUIET ACHIEVER

[matty and luke forever]

^You bet Jess actually there is a few twist that will seem weird but I think are truelygreat.lol

[-michelle-]

Great start. please update soon

[sevenpuddings]

Weird twists are always good. Unpredictable stories are the best. I'm very excited as to where your story is heading

[xGlowingAngelx]

It's really good. I agree, I can see plenty of twists coming up.

[sevenpuddings]

Heh... I can deal with Belle and Henry... its the Luke/Cassie (if that happens) that I'm worried about. But I'm sure you'll write them brilliantly Julie.

That was an awesome chapter, I squealed when I saw Poison was there. God that song is so awesome. And Maddie is so cute and self destructive. I can't wait for more of the story

[sarah_belle]

that was great, cant wait for the update

[tasha7905]

Great Chapters. I like the pairing of Belle and Henry. Cant wait to see what happens next.

[lynhay]

Really great story - liking the idea of Henry and Belle. Can't wait to read the next part

[GazzaBoyUK]

OMG- They are awesome. Im loving it. Henry/Belle..Never would have thought ;)