Traceve Posted September 28, 2006 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2006 ZOMG!! The service was sad But the rest I wasnt expecting at all I need the next chapter and now!! Eve!! How could she do that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shen Posted September 28, 2006 Report Share Posted September 28, 2006 fantastic!!!!!!! Loved it! Update soon! Can't wait to see what happens next! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted September 28, 2006 Report Share Posted September 28, 2006 OMFG ZOE! I freakin' loved that! I can't wait for the next update - that was perfect - I'm so excited! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luckyrabbit Posted September 28, 2006 Report Share Posted September 28, 2006 Whoa, I did not see Trace and Rachel getting kidnapped coming, I thought that Eve would just pop up behind them at the memorial service. Excellent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swfc Posted September 28, 2006 Report Share Posted September 28, 2006 (edited) Thanks Shannon, Shen and Andy! I'm glad you guys liked it! Eve's back and alive and kicking! Yay! Shan, you totally didn't expect it, did you? That Eve would be this evil.... Kidnap her friends. The next update should be up tomorrow or sometime during the weekend. ETA: Thanks Rabs. It was originally going to be that way but I was inspired whilst brushing my teeth one morning! Glad you liked it! Edited September 28, 2006 by swfc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarah_Lewis Posted September 28, 2006 Report Share Posted September 28, 2006 That was awesome Memorial was sad though =o( cant wait to read more =p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psycho_Sis Posted September 28, 2006 Report Share Posted September 28, 2006 omg omg omg omg omggggggg!!! chrissie i can NOT believe i wasnt up to date with ur last 3 updates I just read them all right now- i love it! omgggg eveeeeeee!!! awesome update!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swfc Posted September 30, 2006 Report Share Posted September 30, 2006 Thanks guys. Here's a teeny teaser: “You have ten seconds to get out of my sight.” She stated simply. Neither one of them hesitated. They ran as fast as their legs could carry them. As they turned, neither of them saw the gun that Eve had pulled out and was now aimed at them both. ‘Bang.’ One down. ‘Bang.’ Both down. And then she laughed. The part that shocked her to no end was how cold and evil and how full of pure loathing Eve was. It was as though she was a whole new different person. Tracey was at the brink of losing it. But, this time is was because of anger. Not grief. If her hands were free, and if Eve wasn’t still holding that gun in her hand, Tracey would’ve slapped Eve right there and then. “Don’t you dare tell me to shut up, Eve. After what you did. I can’t believe you faked your own death.” “You’re sick!” Tracey spat. “You need help!” "I had to go to Summer Bay and make them pay. Make them as miserable as I was. But, I needed a plan. I needed a pawn. And that was where Zoë McCallister came in.” Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shen Posted September 30, 2006 Report Share Posted September 30, 2006 OMG!!! Even just the teaser was brilliant!!! Can't wait till the full chapter!!! Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psycho_Sis Posted September 30, 2006 Report Share Posted September 30, 2006 sheeesh girl i am sooo excited for the next part its coming out so nicely!!! please update soon- ur going great and i love the fic so far *hug * xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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