[.jessa-belle.] Posted July 16, 2006 Report Posted July 16, 2006 Summary Set after the victims of the crash come home. Martha is startng to go through despression, and a secret doesnt help it for her. WARNING: Rated M for drug use, suicide thoughts,sexual scenes coarse lanuage. The first chapter will be up soon.
Martha_Jack Posted July 16, 2006 Report Posted July 16, 2006 It sound good can not wait into the updates.
-Annie- Posted July 16, 2006 Report Posted July 16, 2006 Cool! It sounds good. When can we expect the first update?
[.jessa-belle.] Posted July 17, 2006 Report Posted July 17, 2006 Chapter One "Is she alright what happened to her" Jack asked walking up to Dr Young "Blood posining, we heard from Robbie that they drank some water from a hole in the ground, thats why Colin died" Dr Young said "Can I see her, I really need to see her" Jack said "Sure go ahead" Dr Youg said to Jack as he started to walk up ther hall way to Marthas room He knocked on the door No answer He eased it open and saw martha cured up in the bed facing the wall. "Martha" he said entering the room She didnt speak He sat on the bed and touched her arm She flinched and pulled it away "Is everything alright" "Just go away Jack, just go away" Martha said still not facing him "Umm...have I done something" Jack asked taking her hand She turned to face him and took his hand tighter "No, I just want to be alone, to, think about things" she said trying her best to put on a smile. But inside she was dying. "Ok, Love you" Jack said "Love you too" Martha replied And Jack left the room ************* Dr Young entered Martha’s room She had resumed back to her position she was in before Jack had entered "How are you" Dr Young asked "I just feel icky, like a half of me has been sucked out of me" "So what would you like to do" Dr Young asked "I want it out" she said "Ok we will book you in" DR young said and closed the door to her room Martha just sat on her bed and cried. ****************
Traceve Posted July 17, 2006 Report Posted July 17, 2006 Aww Poor Martha. That was good Please update soon.
-Annie- Posted July 17, 2006 Report Posted July 17, 2006 Does anyone else suspect that Martha suffered a miscarriage? Briliant chapter! I look forward to reading on!
Martha_Jack Posted July 17, 2006 Report Posted July 17, 2006 That was great can not wait into update.
loobieloo Posted August 9, 2006 Report Posted August 9, 2006 I have a feeling that I have read this before, is it up on another forum? I think I kow whats going to happen Wow I feel really powerful now that I know whats going to happen and everyone else doesn't! Edit: Yes I have readit before!! Its a fab story
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