matticus01

that was so sweet im hangin for the next chapter :lol:

GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant wait to read the next chapter........hurry PLZ

thankyou, the next chapter will be up very soon

THIS IS GREAT, ITS SO FUNNY THAT BELLE AND mATTIE ARE ENGAGED and Colleen trying to get Mattie and Luc back together is just as funny but i'm gunna kill kimmy

that was great i was almost believing it myself and the way you write is from the heart and beautiful I never imagined it to be Sally Fletcher that was quite a surprise, cant wait for the next chapter :rolleyes: :lol:

heya guys please let me know what you think and whether or not i should continue...i really want to know your opinions

sneak peak of chapter 5 Lying on his bed, feeling a sense of utter belief and looking at a photo of the four people who were known as 'the gang' sitting on the beach all wearing there swimwear, the girls looking much more vibrant than the two boys but all of them happy to be next to one another. ____ looked at the girl in the pink bikini with her hair plaited either side and sighed, he had told Matilda Hunter that he loved her last night and she said she loved him too. will post chapter soon guys n gals

so true.......when are you going to update????

sneak peak of chater 4 guys “I have such a headache and I kissed some random last night but not half as bad as you were, _____ and _____ aye?” _____replied as ______ took a sip from her coffee and spat it straight back out. “WHAT? I, what did I do?” ______ asked as her hands hit the table and her head followed. “You...you dont remember, you told Luc that you loved him and kissed him and then Ric told you he loved you and kissed you and you kissed him and said you love him too” _____ replied as ________ head shot up in surprise, disgust, disbelief and anger. “OH GOD!” Was all _______ could say comments

heya guys im back form work and ill be posting the next chapter in about an hour so hope you didnt mind waiting

sneak peak of chapter 3 Both Ric and Lucas stood there in awww as Matilda walked into Belle's party looking like the only woman that even mattered to them. Ric went to walk off and over to Matilda but lucas had already gone. Lucas picked up a can of Jim beam on his way over and when reached Matilda held out the can to her. "You look great, beautiful" he said as Matilda took the can out of his hand and smiled with that beautiful elegant charming smile of hers. "Thanks Lucas, you look good yourself" she said as she took a mouthful from the can. 2 hours later "LUCAS, can i talk to you" Matilda stumbled to say as she also stumbled over to Lucas with this time a bottle of what looked like cheap wine. "Mattie, your drunk!" Lucas said as Matilda took his hand and dropped the bottle whilst looking into his eyes. "Yes but people tell the truth when there drunk, did you know that Luc?" she asked trying to keep her balance as herself and her hair had a mind of its own. "No, i, i didn't" Lucas replied as Matilda started giggling. "Luc i love you" Matilda said as Lucas looked ataken back but before Lucas could say anything he realized that Matilda was kissing him. Passionate, loving, steaming hot kiss...Matilda kissing Lucas. Matilda kept kissing and slowly entwined her tounge with Lucas's, wrapped her arms around his nice, warm body and pulled him in close so he could feel every groove, every bump, every breath. Lucas slowly put his arms around her waist as she pulled away. "I need another drink!" she screamed as she ran off towards the direction she came in. Matilda had just got back to the bar when Ric approached her. "Mattie can i talk to you?" he asked as she turned and smiled at him with another glass of alcohol. "Sure!" she replied taking another mouthful from her cup. "Mattie, i love you, your my best friend and i love you!" he said as Matilda smiled. "I love you too Ric" she replied as Ric caught her off gaurd and kissed her. Steamy, wet, alcoholic, passionate. At first Matilda didnt kiss him back but then started warming to the idea. 'This must be the alcohol talking, i wouldnt usually do this but hey weve all had alot to drink' hope you like it will post soon guys

Next chapter will be posted sunday the 28 of october, monday the 29 the latest

thanks, the next chapter will be up soon but after that i wont be able to post for a couple of days due to work

:cool: its ok at the start it was just going to martha and jack and there will be more of a mention of them in the next few chapters so hope you like it either way :cool: