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I missed a few updates but here I am. :P

Chapter 72: I love the chat between Ava and Charlie. I had to smile when they were at the supermarket and Ava kept on putting stuff in the trolley. Lol. How cute was Ben when he got his DVD! :wub:

Chapter 73: Oh no! If only Charlie could get past Angelo’s affair. I understand it’s hard but either she’ll have to get past it or she shouldn’t have given him a second chance in the first place. I love how excited Jack’s daughters are about decorating their room but can’t agree on one colour and how Ava is making the decisions about the baby’s room. Poor Jack and Angelo! Lol.

Chapter 74: I liked the talk between Martha and Charlie. Hopefully, Charlie will listen to what her friends told her. It was really sweet of Angelo to book tickets for Charlie and Ruby. They both deserve to get away for a bit. I loved how you described the baby’s room, it must look so beautiful.

Chapter 75:

This is such a great chapter. I love Ruby/Charlie moments. I'm glad they both opened up to each other. I especially loved the following parts.

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“Come here baby” Charlie said as she opened her arms out, inviting Ruby in for a hug.

“Baby?” Ruby questioned as she stood herself up straight “Mum, I’m nearly 24”

Charlie shook her head lightly “4, 24 or 54 you’ll always be my baby” Ruby smiled as she wrapped her arms around Charlie and embraced in the hug with her mother.

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“And we could do with finding some toilets. You know baby my bladder is not some toy for you to play with” Charlie said softly as she looked down to her stomach while gently running her hand across it.

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“Hey, that’s my bed” Charlie said and Ruby looked up at Charlie and pulled a face.

“But I always sleep on the left, so I need the left hand bed” Ruby said as she watched Charlie standing there shaking her head.

“Well I sleep on the left too, so move” Charlie said

“But Mum…..I…..I’m…I’m your baby, you should give me what I want” Ruby said as she gave Charlie a cheeky grin.

“Well…..I’m the pregnant lady, so I win, so c’mon shift” Charlie said.

You've got to be kidding me! Of all the hotels in the world, they had to be in the same hotel as that b****! How is Charlie suppose to think about her marriage if the reason for her marital problems is standing right next to her? :angry:

More please. :D

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...what an ending...i hope the baby is alright and that they manage to get hold of Angelo to let him know what was going on

even though shelly is not someone charlie wanted to see hopefully her experience as a nurse will be of use.

can't wait for the next update

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Great Update!!

Hope the baby is ok and Angelo gets to Charlie soon. I hope he's not to upset about missing the birth.

Now that the baby is here hopefully Charlie and Angelo will be able to move on together as soon as Shelly disappears.

Update Soon!!!!

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Wow Shelly seemed to come through ok, I hope she can save this baby cos it seems like she actually wants to!! Poor Angelo, he wanted so much to be there, stupid phone! And poor wee Ben, he's so cute not wanting to leave his daddy, Matthew is lovely too. Great advice Angelo has been given, but he'll get a chance to put it into practice sooner than he thinks, that is if he gets to see Charlie soon. Hopefully they will get her and peanut to the hospital soon and it will all be ok. :huh: Wonderful as usual Danni!

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That was a quick update Danni, you are spoiling me!

Shelly really came through at the end there, which I'm glad about.

Poor Charlie and Ruby, that was such a terrifying situation :(

Hope the baby is okay,

- Sam!

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Wow Wow Wow!!!!! Two AMAZING updates there Danni!

And it would be when I have little internet!!!!

Chapter 75

I loved this, the whole dynamic Charlie and Ruby have is so sweet. I love how their relationship is, you write that so well :) I'm glad they talked whilst they drove to the retreat place, some made me laugh, in a weird little way :lol: I hope the holiday does them both the world of good, as they both need it. But what Ruby said about never forgetting what happened was -wow-Charlie will never forget it, but she can -like Ruby said- focus on the future all of the Chuby :wub:

And Ben, grabbing Charlie's leg when they left LOL so sweet!

:o what is Bitch -I mean, errr, Shelly doing back!

Chapter 76

Jack and Angelo with the boys fishing was so cute!!!! And Ben only wanting to talk to Charlie -awwwwwwwwwwww lol and his fish, bless him I love Ben so cute! You write him beautifully

OMG Shelly! first she makes Charlie's life a living hell -bitch- and then she shows that she can be helpful and delivers Peanut!!!

OMG by the way, didn't see that coming :P poor Charlie, poor Peanut, I hope she is ok!!

I'm REALLY enjoying this Danni, and I can't wait for the next update!

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Wow, fantastic chapters! :D

Chapter 75 - I loved the conversation between Charlie and Ruby. Oh no, I can't believe Shelly is staying in the same hotel as Charlie. This won't help Charlie get over what Angelo did.

Chapter 76 - I loved the boys' fishing trip. I hope Peanut's ok. Hopefully the ambulance will arrive soon.

Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

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Loved that Danni, especially the stuff with the kids, and Ben not wanting to see the baby, I hope he changes his mind soon! Poor Ava wanting to hold her little sister, I'm sure Charlie and Angelo feel the same way! Glad to see Morag too :)

Sorry this is short, must dash and do some last minute maths!!

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Amazing update Danni!

Poor Charlie blaming herself for how Peanut is, I can see why she's blaming herself but its not her fault, and I loved what Angelo said to Charlie about Peanut and that she was a 'meant to be' :wub:

Ava and her teddy for the baby, aww how cute is she? And asking Erin all sorts about why Peanut was attachted to machines.

Peanut sounds so small! only a couple of pounds and so small in length! I really hope she pulls through bless her -again, I loved what Angelo said about the half Buckton :wub:-

and Shelly, Oh my god, she did such a nice thing getting the baby to breath and delivering her and then she still goes after Angelo! what a bitch! Grrr, hopefully thats the last of her.

The last part with Charlie apologising to Peanut was :'( I'm sad.

Anyways, Can't wait for the next update, LOVING this :D

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