I'll Always Be Here (by Danni02) - comments

[callyha]

Great update Danni!

I loved everything about it.

And Charlie and Ruby's chat so sweet, and I'm glad Ruby knows that she isn't a rubbish big sister, Ava and Ben worship her and peanut obviously loves her too-so sweet how you wrote that!

Callum's reaction to his mummy coming home was so cute, I love how you write that

And I felt Morag's emotions as she tried to tell Charlie about the disc. But Jay! OMG Grrrr..... that's why he was getting close to Ruby? Out of guilt?

And Angelo is happy that Ruby is home! yey, at least that will help Ruby get over her guilt, even though it was Jay who left the gate open grr.

Can't wait for the next update Danni. This was great.

And, your welcome

[Chester-Sam]

I knew he was bad news! Scum bag!

Loved this whole chapter, Ruby needs to talk to Charlie, and let everything out.

I wonder how they'll break it to Ruby

How much more can she take?

- Sam!

[Inactive User]

Amazing chapter! Glad to hear your block is gone

Loved Charlie and Ruby's chat. So sweet and beautifully written!

Can't believe it's Jay who did this! I knew he was bad news.

Poor Ruby. Wondering how she will react to it when they tell her it was Jay.

Update soon *hugs* xx

[Sabrina]

I loved the chat between Charlie and Ruby. I hope Ruby talks to someone about how she feels soon.

I can't believe it was Jay who killed Xavier. Poor Ruby I wonder how she'll react when she finds out.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

[carywary]

Oh my goodness! I mean I had a bad feeling about Jay but I would never have thought he killed Xavier! And Ruby slept with him! Oh dear goodness, you shocked me with that one! I'm glad there was a reason for Angelo's wierd welcome to Ruby, hopefully the two of them can have a little chat and sort out their differences. I loved how excited Ava and Ben were to see Ruby, especially Ben, loved how you wrote it. And little Callum, that was sweet too! I hope Jay gets the punishment he deserves and leaves the Rosetta family alone from now on, or Angelo will have something to say to him I'm sure! Great update, shocking but in a really good way

[Barbara]

I missed four chapters but for some reason, I thought I had already left a comment for the two first chapters I missed.

Great chapters and I'm glad you may be over your writer's block! *grins*

Poor Ruby! I understand why she needed some time to herself. She clearly hasn't finished grieving over Xavier. I'm so glad Charlie remembered about the tree house. I loved the Charlie/Ruby scenes, esp the one where they talked about Ruby's childhood. Charlie is right: Ruby shouldn't bottle everything up and talk to someone.

Aw Ben, Ava and Cal were so happy to see Ruby back home!

Jay is the one who killed Xavier! I wonder if he realised Ruby was Xavier's wife.

More please.

[callyha]

Amazing chapter Danni!

Poor Charlie having to tell Ruby. But she needed to be told, I just felt soory for Charlie being the one having to tell Ruby.

And Ruby bless her! She really fell for Jay and he did that to Xavier! I just want to give her a huge cuddle! I hope she opens up to someone soon, maybe Charlie because all Charlie wants to do is be there for Ruby. And I loved that "I'll always be here" was used

Angelo, how amazing is he? And I had to chuckle at the Ruby being as stuborn as Charlie is

And Ben and Ava at the end! Ben wondering why Charlei&Angelo were sitting on the bath was funny and Ava talking to Peanut was sooo cute

I can't wait for the next chapter and see what is going to happen with this Jay situation

And I really hope Charlie can get Ruby to open up, this is too big to hid from!

More soon Please!

[Rach Loves H&A]

Really good update!!!

Hope Ruby can get some closure soon

Update Soon!!!

[Inactive User]

Great chapter!

Poor Ruby! She will have to open up sometime soon. Keeping things inside and bottled is not healthy.

I hope Jay goes to jail for what he did.

Update soon xx

[carywary]

Aw cute ending with Ava. Poor poor Ruby, she must feel so awful, and it's hard for the rest of the family cos Charlie and Angelo want to help her through it but don't know how until she comes to them. I hope he gets what he deserves in prison. I can't help but wonder what he knew about Ruby before this..hmm. And I suppose the kids will be asking where he is, it's only going to get harder, I hope Ruby doesn't get any more hurt through all of this, they've only just got her back. I love how Angelo is so good to Charlie and he's able to comfort her and make everything ok. And Morag is great too, you've just got to love the relationship she has with them. Looking forward to the next chapter