I'll Always Be Here (by Danni02) - comments

[Sabrina]

Fantastic chapter, Danni!

Poor Charlie. I feel so sorry for her. She really doesn't need any more stress.

I loved how Ben went to look for a dummy for Callum.

I hope Charlie's right about Ruby being at their old house.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

[Rach Loves H&A]

Great Update!!

Feel sorry for Charlie and Angelo, hope Ruby comes home soon

Update Soon!!

[Inactive User]

Great chapter. Loved it Hope Charlie's theory about the treehouse comes true! Update soon xx

[carywary]

Awk no, I wish Angelo could find Ruby so that Charlie would stop stressing, maybe she'll be in the treehouse? Cos it's starting to affect the kids and it's getting a bit messy, and I'm sure Cal is looking his mummy. I wonder what Morag will tell Angelo, it's good to see that she's still working on it even though they don't know where Ruby is. It WAS a good chapter!! I do wish Charlie and Angelo would stop letting things come between them though!

[callyha]

Danni, that was such a lovely update.

I am so glad Charlie found Ruby.

I loved how you wrote something about their past, and how Ruby would always got to the tree house whenever she just wanted time to herself. I when Charlie said that Ruby tied herself to the trunk with a jump rope!

And the tree carving; how Charlie had mixed feelings. But, its true, Ruby was the happy thing that came from that. I'm glad she's going back home now, everyone needs her, especially Cal. I loved the end:

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“Can you give me a little help?” Charlie said as she held her hand out. Ruby smiled at her mother before taking her hand into hers and pulling her up, before she wrapped her arms around her and hugged her tightly. Charlie returned the hug as she ran her hand through Ruby’s hair, before placing a gently kiss on top of her head. “Now let’s get you home” Charlie said as pulled free from the hug. Ruby nodded lightly before they walked back up the garden and in the direction of the car.

A great mix of humor and love

And the baby kicking even more when Charlie kept saying 'sister' when reffering to finding Ruby.

Glad Angelo and Morag have seemed to be getting closer to identifying Xavier's killer. It will be something good to happen to Ruby when he/she is found.

Can't wait for the next update Danni. I LOVE this

[Sabrina]

I loved that chapter.

I'm so glad Charlie found Ruby. I loved the talk between them and how you included Charlie's memories.

Hopefully the disc will be able to tell Angelo who killed Xavier.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

[Rach Loves H&A]

Really Good Update!!!

Glad Charlie managed to find Ruby

Update Soon!!!

[carywary]

Danni that was so beautiful, you need to have a little more confidence in yourself! You described the house really well, I felt like I was Charlie walking through it. Loved all of the mother/daughter stuff, it was lovely, and I hope that Ruby doesn't feel nervous about coming home cos you could see how much Angelo loves her the way he was talking to that man, desperate to find out who killed Xavier. All the stuff with the kids was really cute as usual, I hope they never grow up and lose their charm! I can't help but keep re-reading it all, there's so much emotion, wow. I hope they find on the disc what they need to see so that Ruby isn't getting her hopes up for nothing. Beautiful ending, wow I don't even know how to describe it!!

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Aww loved the talk between Charlie and Ruby So sweet and well-written

Hope they will get what they wanted on the disc

Update soon xxx

[Rach Loves H&A]

Really Good Update!!!

Glad that your block has gone as this is a really good story, I am a big Charlie and Angelo fan and there isn't many good stories about them around.

Can't wait to find out what happens with Jay!! Charlie was right, she knew that something wasn't right with him!!

Glad the family is all back together and when Charlie has the baby it will be complete.

Update Soon!!!!