Inactive User Posted September 9, 2010 Report Posted September 9, 2010 Loved the last two chapters. So lovely and well-written! Update soon xx Quote
Chester-Sam Posted September 9, 2010 Report Posted September 9, 2010 I love Charlie's hatred of the word 'Granny' haha! But I do agree with her, Jay has been weird a few too many times and Ruby has noticed it. Whatever it is it better not affect Ruby or baby Cal - Sam! Quote
callyha Posted September 10, 2010 Report Posted September 10, 2010 N'awwwwww I loved the interation between Angelo and Charlie (And I ain't got a romantic bone in my body) I thought it was sweet. And I at: Quote “Yeah, your right” Angelo smiled “And I’m Granddad but you’re not Granny? How does that work?” Angelo said “I’m too young to be called Granny” Charlie said “Charlie, I’m younger than you” Angelo said Loved the little chat between Ruby and Charlie, its nice that Charlie is looking out for Ruby, and that Ruby has taken note of what Chalrie said, I just hope Jay isn't upto no good, poor Ruby More soon please Danni! Quote
Sabrina Posted September 10, 2010 Report Posted September 10, 2010 I'm glad Charlie told Ruby about her concerns about Jay. That's good that Charlie and Angelo have talked things through. I loved their conversation. I love how Charlie hates being called 'Granny'. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
Barbara Posted September 10, 2010 Report Posted September 10, 2010 Aw they're having a little girl! I understand that Angelo was a bit disappointed but did he really have to act like that? Thankfully, he seems to be okay with the idea of having a little girl now. Charlie is right, their daughter could be a tomboy. Jay looks suspicious, doesn't he? I wonder what that's about and I hope Ruby will listen to Charlie and be careful. I laughed at the Granny and Granddad part! Angelo has a point! More please. Quote
Laura158 Posted September 11, 2010 Report Posted September 11, 2010 Woww!!! I've missed sooo many updates!!!! It makes me realise how often you update! You really are fantastic at writing and updating fan fictions. You know just how to keep me interested and absolutely obsessed Where do I start reviewing?? Chapter 46 Ava was so cute when she was talking about her swimming classes and about how she wouldn't be able to tumble turn! Can't believe Shelly's the nurse and that she almost told Ava about the other baby Chapter 47 I hope Morag's telling the truth about visiting Ava and that she's not really sick. Aww Angelo and Charlie's conversation was so nice I'm glad Angelo has decided to have a paternity test. Jay's just becoming even more supspicious... Chapter 48 Angleo's so funny for not wanting to go inside the house because of Morag! Ava was so cute with the swimming bit! Colleen seeing Shelly drinking- It's so good that Colleen wouldn't tell anyone the secret Chapter 49 OMG I can't believe Shelly would lie to them like that- all because of Grant! She's sneaky. Love the way that Charlie told her that Angelo chose her anyway! Chapter 50 Love that they moved in together! The part with Ruby was sweet and I'm glad Morag gives them her blessing (a bit!) Chapter 51 What! How can Angelo not be happy about the baby now? First it was Charlie now Angelo! I'm beginning to wonder whether they really want this baby at all! Awww Callumn's crawling! Chapter 52 Charlie's right something not right about Jay. Ruby shouldn't trust him... I'm glad Charlie and Angelo made up and worked out why Angelo wasn't happy with a girl! I loved interactions between Charlie and Angelo at the end! Over all I think ou do a fantastic job writing this and I'm sorry my comments been so long! Quote
Rach Loves H&A Posted September 11, 2010 Report Posted September 11, 2010 Great Update!! Hope you update soon!!! Quote
callyha Posted September 12, 2010 Report Posted September 12, 2010 That was a great update Danni! I loved it! Quote Charlie, Angelo, Ruby, Ava and Ben were sitting at the table eating their dinner when talk turned to a name for the baby. “What about Jade?” Angelo suggested. “Oh no” Ava said “Jade is a bully in my class. We can’t call the baby that” “Oh right then” Angelo said “What about Lucie?” “Well Lucie is Jade’s friend so I don’t want that either” Ava said before she took a drink of her orange juice. “Oh and it’s your choice is it?” Angelo said “I can help chose” Ava said “Okay” Angelo laughed lightly. “So what names do you like?” Angelo asked “Well let’s see…..there’s Gabriella, Taylor, Kelsie, Sharp-” “Hey Ava, how about a name of someone who isn’t in High School Musical?” Ruby said. Ava looked up at Ruby and pulled a face. “Okay….Hannah or Miley or Lily or Amber or Ashley” Ava said as she stuck her tongue out at Ruby. “Great now its Hannah Montana’s cast” Ruby said as she rolled her eyes. “Well they are nice names” Ava yelled “Aren’t they mummy” “Eh yeah…..Lily, I like Lily” Charlie smiled as she looked up at Angelo to see what his thoughts were on the name. “It’s a flower” Angelo said as he screwed his face up. “Yeah but it’s also a girl’s name” Ruby said “But it’s a flower. She’s not a flower” Angelo said “Right okay” Charlie sighed “We won’t call her Lily. What about Aimee or Isabella?” “Not the first time you’ve mentioned those” Angelo said “Yeah, well I like them” Charlie smiled “Isabella Rosetta, seriously?” Ruby said “Don’t call your child that” “What, why not?” Angelo asked “Because it just sounds.....just don’t” Ruby said “Hmmm. What about Jasmine. I like Jasmine” Angelo smiled “Isn’t Jasmine a flower?” Ruby asked “No she’s a princess” Ava said and Charlie and Ruby let out a small laugh. “Well she is mummy” Ava said “Yeah, I know sweetie” Charlie said “So why did you laugh at me” Ava asked sadly “Because it’s also a flower” Ruby said “It’s a flowering shrub” Angelo said, correcting Ruby. “So, a flower then” Ruby said as she raised her eyebrows. “No, it’s different” Angelo argued “How’s it any different? If I don’t get Lily because it’s a flower, then you don’t get Jasmine” Charlie said “Right. Fair enough” Angelo exhaled lightly “What do you think mate?” Angelo asked as he looked down at his son, who had so far remained very quiet. “I like Ben” Ben said quietly. “That’s your name” Ava laughed “We can’t call the baby Ben too and anyways it’s a girl” Ava said “I like Charlie” Ben said “That’s mum’s name” Ava laughed “Well I like mummy” Ben said before he jumped down from his seat and climbed up onto Charlie’s knee and cuddled into her. Charlie smiled as she placed a kiss on her sons head and gently rubbed his back. “What about daddy mate?” Angelo said “You’ve got a funny name” Ben laughed I loved this whole part, so sweet, A lovely family moment. I really want to know whats going on with Jay and this guy. Whatever it is, I hope it doesn't end up hurting Ruby or Callum! Or the rest of the family! More soon Please Danni! Love it! Quote
Inactive User Posted September 12, 2010 Report Posted September 12, 2010 Great chapter. Liked it Loved the family moment between Changelo and kids picking names out for the baby-so sweet Update soon please xx Quote
Laura158 Posted September 13, 2010 Report Posted September 13, 2010 Oh thanks It's nice you take the time to read all the comments you get! I loved that conversation about names with the whole family! Why doesn't Angelo want a name of a flower?? I really want to know what happening with Jay! I'm positive that something is going on that will hurt Ruby... what a shame, Ruby deserves someone nice. Great Update Quote
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