I'll Always Be Here (by Danni02) - comments

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Loved the talk between Charlie and Ruby.

Ava and Ben are so aborable!

*sighs* Morag's reaction I can understand why because she didn't want Charlie to get hurt again

Update soon please xx

[Barbara]

I liked Ruby and Charlie's talk. It's great that they are so close. They'll always be there for each other.

I'm glad Ava is talking to her mum again. I had a feeling Charlie would pick High School Musical. Ava would have never missed it and Charlie knows it very well. She must have watched that movie like 100 times.

Ben is so cute as well. I like how he told Charlie to leave so Ruby could read him a story.

I can see why Morag said all those things to Charlie as she just wants to protect her but she could still show some support. This is definitely not easy for Charlie.

More please.

[Laura158]

Great update

Sorry I didn't update on the other part. But I will comment on it now!

I'm glad Ruby made Charlie see sense about the situation with Angelo . It's a shame that Morag doesn't support her

Ava and Ben are sooo cute and I loved their interactions when they were trying to get the phone. And when Ava wasn't talking to Charlie! She actually makes sense with her motives about it.

Fantastic writing! I love it

[charlie29]

Great chapter. Glad that Charlie has not totally given up on Angelo and she still wants to live with him. The kids in this fic are written really well, they are so cute! Glad Ruby is supporting Charlie, but shame that Morag doesn't share the same feelings. More please!

[carywary]

Brilliant Danni! I loved the wee mother and daughter chat with Charlie and Ruby about how Angelo loved Ruby as if she was his own daughter, even though she reminded him of Charlie having beeen raped, I thought that was just lovely. It's typical of Angelo, how can Morag be so cruel! He knows he did wrong, he has apologised and I don't think he could be any more remorseful, I'm glad Charlie stuck up for him. I loved seeing her slowly come round to the idea of taking him back Ava and Ben are so cute, it was funny that she wouldn't talk to Charlie but then came running when High School Musical was put on I hope Charlie meant the "I'm still going to live with daddy" bit. Loved this!! Update soon please!

[carywary]

I liked how you did the wee surfing bit, I'm not an expert so I really can't find fault! You have to laugh at Ava and the way they're all teasing her, and waiting until she's 21 I'm glad that Charlie and Angelo are going to talk, I think they need to talk about things before they can spend time together with the kids and answer their questions which I'm sure they'll have. It's good that Ruby has Jay to talk to...and the kiss I'm glad she's so happy! Great update Danni

[Chester-Sam]

Hmm, who was the text really from?..

- Sam!

[Sabrina]

Great chapter!

Ruby, Charlie and Angelo teasing Ava was funny.

That's good that Charlie and Angelo are going to talk. Hopefully they can sort things out.

I loved the surfing lesson Jay gave Ruby.

I wonder who really sent Jay the text.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

[charlie29]

Great chapter. Glad Charlie is going to talk to Angelo, hopefully they can work things out again. The surfing bit was great, I still get a funny feeling about Jay and wonder who the text was from. I hope he's not dodgy for Ruby's sake. Continue soon

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Glad Changelo are going to work things out

Loved the surfing lesson Jay gave Ruby

Loved Changelo and Ruby teasing Ava

Wondering who the text for Jay is from?