I'll Always Be Here (by Danni02) - comments

[charlie29]

Oh no!!!! Was all happy reading Chapter 40 and that Charlie and Angelo had worked things out and were going to get back together, and then the bombshell that Shelly is pregnant!! I hope its a false alarm and she's just trying to stir things up. Poor Charlie, what is she going to do now? Loving this fic, so well written, can't wait for the next part!!

[carywary]

Chapter 39 - I loved how it went so well, all the banter and the fact that there weren't many awkward moments, although the dessert one did make me laugh And he's so thoughtful with the non-alcoholic champagne and the fact that he didn't drink. And their wedding meal, aww I loved their little chat about how much of a blessing the kids were, and Angelo's concerns about his relationship with their unborn baby, and also Ava, and how Charlie tried to reassure him that everything will be ok. And the necklace, it sounds beautiful! I love how he had all of this planned so far in advance. The kiss...whoops but the awkward bit didn't seem to last too long. Brilliant chapter Danni!

Chapter 40 - Wow, so beautiful. I loved this chapter sooo much, it's like how they used to be. I love how they both want to try and make their marriage work, how they both said I love you, and the way Angelo referred to Ruby as his daughter and Callum as his grandson. I love how Ben was so excited to see them and he ran to Angelo, how sweet! It was lovely how Ava was so happy to see that they were all going to live together again. Loved the ending, it's all so happy now!

Chapter 41 - No! Just as things were getting good again, I have to admit the pregnancy thing did cross my mind at the time but I really hoped it wouldn't happen, I hope she's lying. I hate the way Shelly treated Charlie, but I love how Angelo rejected her and went to the other side of the room, I can see she's out to cause trouble. But I love how Charlie didn't slap her, cos I'm sure it was more than tempting. You wrote it really well, I could just hear Shelly saying all that. I wish Ruby was a bit more positive about Charlie and Angelo getting back together...but it'll be hard with all this. Maybe Ruby will slap her again Update soon!

[Laura158]

Great update

I love the interaction between Charlie and Ruby and it made me smile when Ruby called Charlie granny on Callums behalf!

Oh no Shelly! How can she do that? Turning up at his house ( his old house )

And she's pregnant! Uh oh... not sure how either are going to react..

[Chester-Sam]

Aww I loved Ruby running home to help her mum, and saying 'I'll always be here'

I hate that the horrible cow is pregnant! It's just hurting Charlie more :/

The kids were cute trying to help mum and get the phone to ring Ruby

Loved it, cant wait for the next chapter

- Sam!

[callyha]

Poor Ava, Charlie didn't mean to shout, bless her.

Loved her and Ben trying to reach Charlie's phone to ring Ruby, that was so sweet!

And I loved how Ruby rushed over to help her mum, I really loved that part. Especially when she said I'LL ALWAYS BE HERE

Poor Charlie, I just want to give her a huge hug and tell her everything will be ok!! I HATE Shelly! She's a B****.

Amazing update Danni! My hands were flapping all about and clapping too! Two updates in a short time, ME LIKEY!!

More soon please xx

[Inactive User]

Yah you updated!

Poor Charlie I wanted to hug her.

Shelly is such a cow ruining Changelo's happiness!

Aww bless the kids helping their mum and getting Ruby over there.

Aww loved the moment between Charlie and Ruby Loved how Ruby promised her mother she would be always here for her, so sweet!

[carywary]

Shelly She is such a cow, I can't believe the way she speaks to Charlie, like she is dirt. I'm glad Angelo stopped Charlie slapping Shelly, cos I'm sure it would have turned into a bit more. I loved the bit when Angelo said he was happy his wife was having his baby, I wish Charlie had smiled back, but I'm sure it was such a shock to find out Shelly was pregnant. I'm really glad that Angelo told Charlie about sleeping with Shelly at the time, cos I don't know that she would have forgiven him if he hadn't told her. And I liked how Angelo told Shelly to get lost and that he wouldn't care if he never saw her again. It must have been a bit hard to say, cos if she is indeed pregnant (and I am still secretly hoping that she isn't ) then it's his child, a part of him, and it just shows how much he loves his family that he's willing not to see his child to keep his own family together. And he refers to it as Shelly's baby, he hasn't even acknowledged it as his own. I'm glad Angelo had the wit to walk away from Shelly in the bar this time, cos his stupid mistake last time may just have cost him everything I thought the bit with Ava and Ben was so cute , trying to get into the bedroom, trying to get to the mobile, and then trying to ring Ruby, how sweet. And I loved Ruby calling Angelo dad . I better stop now and I must try to use paragraphs in the future!! But anyway I loved this chapter, in a really wierd way cos I hate seeing their relationship destroyed. You wrote it brilliantly, update soon!!

[Barbara]

Shelly is pregnant! She may say Angelo is the dad but if I were him, I'd ask for a paternity test. I don't trust her at all. Actually, I wouldn't even be surprised if it turns out she isn't pregnant. She was so surprised when Angelo told her Charlie had changed her mind and was keeping the baby that it made me even more suspicious. And how dare she talk to Charlie like that in her own house?

Things were starting to get back on track with Charlie and Angelo. That stupid woman is ruining everything.

Ava is pretty clever, isn't she? Picking up her brother and knowing how speed dial works was really smart.

I wonder what Morag is doing in the city. I hope she is alright.

More please.

[Sabrina]

Brilliant updates!

Chapter 40 - That's great that Charlie and Angelo are back on track. I'm glad Charlie has decided she will move back in with Angelo.

Chapter 41 - I love how Ruby is so concerned about Charlie - they have such a great relationship. Shelly is pregnant?! I hope she's lying about the baby being Angelo's.

Chapter 42 - Ava and Ben were so sweet wanting to help Charlie and calling Ruby. I feel so sorry for Charlie. She's been through so much. She really doesn't deserve this.

Chapter 43 - I love the advice Ruby gave Charlie. She was right when she said Charlie shouldn't throw away what she really wants. I loved Charlie's plan to get Ava to talk to her. Morag shouldn't have snapped at Charlie like that - Charlie doesn't need anymore stress.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

[callyha]

Amazing update there Danni! I loved it!!

The first part of that chapter where Charlie and Ruby were talking about how Angelo had accepted Ruby as his own daughter was so beautiful! And I had to chuckle when Ruby said the line "Acutally I was your sister when you got with Angelo". I love how close Charlie and Ruby are in your fic, its really lovely to read. And beacuse you write so well, I can see this happeneing as I'm reading.

I loved it when Charlie put High School Musical on to get Ava to talk to her again, that was so sweet how they spoke again, and I had to laugh when Ava said "Rewind it , I missed it because you were talking". Ava is so cute and adorable. As is Ben!

Morag's reaction was so typical 'Morag'. But I can see where she's coming from.

Hopefully things will sort out for Charlie and Angelo. And that Shelly will go away never to come back and not to be pregnant at all.

Can't wait for the next chapter. I LOVE this fic

Edited August 24, 2010 by callyha