Laura158 Posted July 18, 2010 Report Posted July 18, 2010 Aww great update! I loved Ava and Ben ordering their icecreams and Ben asking Leah cute questions all the time! Ava is one smart cookie! She knows somethings wrong with her mum and dad and she could spot Ruby trying to distract her! It's soo cute but realistic. Charlie and Angelo over?? With a baby on the way and 2 young children already I'm not sure how well that will go.... Ruby being the grown up and sensible one taking control and supporting Charlie like that is so lovely- I love their close relationship in this fiction. Can't wait for the next update because I want to see what Charlie ends up telling Ava and Ben and their reactions... Quote
xXxTEMPZxXx Posted July 18, 2010 Report Posted July 18, 2010 great update love Ava and Ben.. more soon plzzz xx Quote
Inactive User Posted July 18, 2010 Report Posted July 18, 2010 Great chapter Good work, mate. Update soon please x Quote
callyha Posted July 18, 2010 Report Posted July 18, 2010 Amazing! As usual Loved it! Little Ava is soo cute and Ben too Hope Charlie and Angelo can get passed this, poor Charlie Ruby was right though, he was a bit of a bast***. More soon please Quote
charlie29 Posted July 18, 2010 Report Posted July 18, 2010 great updates, love this story. Can't believe Angelo could do that to his family. The kids are so cute and good of Ruby and Morag to rally round. More soon! Quote
Barbara Posted July 18, 2010 Report Posted July 18, 2010 I leave for a week and everything falls apart. Angelo! I know he was upset and angry but sleeping with another woman is not an excuse. What a s***! She knows he's married and has kids and she still comes on to him. Poor Charlie! She is going through so much right now. She really didn't need this. I feel so sorry for her. The kids were cute as always. I wonder what Charlie is going to tell them. Ava is pretty clever and she notices things so she might find out the truth anyway. I want to find out more about Jay. More please. Quote
carywary Posted July 19, 2010 Report Posted July 19, 2010 No!! She can't kick him out! And now Ava and Ben know something's going on Ooh Jay, I hope we see more of him soon! You wrote their argument so well. I loved the way Angelo cupped her cheek, aww how could she turn him away. I like the way that although Charlie said it was over she did say it would take a long time for him to earn her trust, so I hope he can. And I don't want Ruby to hate Angelo cos that won't make it any easier. You wrote it all so well And I nearly missed the update, ah! xo Quote
Chester-Sam Posted July 19, 2010 Report Posted July 19, 2010 Poor Charlie I love her relationship with Ruby, they can always lean on each other, it's refreshing. Love this fic, I look forward to updates Quote
Inactive User Posted July 19, 2010 Report Posted July 19, 2010 Great chapter Awww poor Ava I want to hug her. Loved the tickling between Charlie and Ava Whooo go Ruby for slapping that bitch, yah! I wish she should have punched Shelly into the nose, lol! Go away, Shelly! Wish she should leave town now Hope Changelo will soon work things out Quote
callyha Posted July 19, 2010 Report Posted July 19, 2010 Great update Danni Ava, Bless her, just want to cuddle her, she's so cute! Grr Shelly. BI**H Poor Charlie. Go rubes! Having a go at both Angelo and Shelly! More soon please Quote
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