emmasi Posted May 12, 2007 Report Posted May 12, 2007 Type of story: One shot - Poem Rating: G Main Characters: Lucas Genre: Angst/Elegy Warnings: **MAJOR SPOILERS FOR UK!** (VD) Is Story being proof read: No Summary: My interpretation of the "mature" poem that may have won Naomi's heart at the Writer's Circle ... Elegy He wore the word “Sweet” on his shirt Warm brown beneath desolate black. Orphaned, he sent a rose to the dirt; Abandoned. My brother Jack Watched over him knowing the pain Of a son who’s seen his Mum’s curtain call But for me, the grief wasn’t the same Two years’ worth, or three, all-in-all. My Dad’s second wife, had she said yes Instead had to flock to her kind To her children, and theirs, even bloodless More tempting than us, in her mind. Now for my trouble, I’m lost. She’s dead. So how should I feel? The bastard son of a ghost Again. Cut open where I thought I would heal. I haven’t been home since they told me A town full of memories and dust Is not what I need to be happy Or to break through my heart’s bitter crust. The wind trading sea salt for crying The sand keeping footprints in grain Will be there when I vow to start trying To see Summer Bay again. Comments.
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