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InfantryAlex

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  1. Yeah, I thought it wouldn't be wise to go on with the whole kidnapping plan, as hard as it was to write. Zac is my favourite, then Leah. Peter already has an idea (because of the phone call), but then again he could think Tank would do as he was told and changed his mind to let him go. Thank you very much, for you support.
  2. Uneasy about that chapter, but will Zac Be okay?

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  3. I never thought of him still harboring feelings for Leah, that is an interesting twist. I know, he has done some damage, pretty much gonna give Leah a shock. I am debating Kat being involved when she gets the first demand..
  4. A bit unsure of that chapter, but I think it was good. :unsure:

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  5. I've started to read it earlier, I'm loving it so far! My attention span is all over the place at the moment. Leah's going to go crazy with worry. I haven't figured out if and/or when she'll go to the cops. Well I'm gonna be writing the next chapter now. Just thought I'd reply and let you now, I've been reading your story when I catch up I'll definitely comment (I'll finish reading tomorow!)
  6. That's why I've only brought her in for a fleeting visit, I don't think I'll be having her stay. I have a good idea for who the person is, but it'll be an OOC character.
  7. Ah, my sleepy brain is failing to keep up with chapter numbers. I will edit it now, thank you! Yeah Peter did, but they tried to finish it, but Leah was annoyed at the 'rat' comment. Thank you, will update again tonight or tomorrow. Probably tomorrow, I struggled with this chapter.
  8. Stop it! I'm already worried about that! I want them to last, and I want them to be happy. I'm trying to think of a potential 'shocker' kidnapper. But I honestly don't know who. Might need to alter the warnings on this too. :3 Amanda was never that cool in the show, I remember. But this, she's nice. God, can't have them both being evil! Thank you, update again tonight.
  9. Wow. Episode was Super Intense.

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  10. I'm just wanting some happiness. I want them to be able to get through everything. Leah deserves someone permanent in her life, and I think her and Zac suit each other. Thank you, for the comments and the support! Calm before the trouble, I say! Thanks for reading, too!
  11. I don't know what they saw the character as, but so frustratingly annoying is one thing.
  12. I admit she can act, but I did not like Isla at all. Just didn't like her.
  13. Figured it can't be all sweet sailing for 'brothers' at the most part to be all happy to see each other after all this time. Thank you for reading. I haven't fully figured out, if he will figure it out. I'm still trying to see how this can naturally progress to what I have planned. Thanks for reading!
  14. Thank you! I've been working on the update all night, trying to make the tension at dinner come on naturally. Will be posted soon.
  15. Tried update 'A Target For Love' And wasn't feeling the update, shall try again tomorrow. Can't figure out the tension between VJ and Peter, and can't figure out what else ensues to build up the drama. 

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  16. I was like 6 or 7 then, it's okay in this it'll be different. Dan will be father, but thank you for the info! Thank you! That means a lot!
  17. Oh? He's Vinnie's son? Ooh. I didn't know that. I don't know who Vinnie is, I hadn't watched it when he was in then. But yes, in this VJ will be Dan's kid. For the most part, Dan was obviously (in my eyes) there for him. The trouble from Peter is going to build up, and slowly build. He will make trouble, that's the plan for this. But I want the tension to grow somewhat naturally and am still trying to figure it out. Dinner will be interesting. I just wish we could see more of them on screen, is all, so I'm putting it down in story. Update tonight! Hopefully.
  18. Thank you! I had to go through the old cast to find out who I was after, I knew there was another kid tied to the family (I thought he was Peter's kid) but to see he's Dan's was interesting. Couldn't have Amanda coming to town, and leaving her son behind. Ooh thank you! I'll try to update tomorrow night.
  19. Thank you! I didn't really get it with their relationship at first, but I do find that they're less seen on screen and would love to see more. I'm aiming for happy, but as drama happens drama will ensue. In my opinion, I think Hunter and VJ could get on great, I want to see a brotherly bond on the show grow for them. Peter and Amanda weren't my first choices, I was going to go with 'I faked my death' scenario with Dan... But I couldn't get it to work, nor did I really feel it starting it so I scrapped it. Thank you for your feedback!
  20. Maddy pregnant, and could be Oscar's. Now this is interesting! Just caught up with this story. Olivia with VJ, that is definitely an interesting pairing. I like Oscar and Skye! They're neat. Love it. Please update again soon.
  21. Thank you! I am glad you liked it! I like the Hunter/VJ thing with them getting on. Not all plain sailing where Peter's concerned (I did have to check if he was alive before deciding on his return) I'll try and update within the next few days.
  22. I am sorry I've been away!! >.> -_-

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  23. Interesting start, please continue.
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