Billy Posted August 13, 2005 Report Share Posted August 13, 2005 Episode six:A encounter with the enemy: The hunters were waiting anxiously in the relitives room as they wait on news on matilda, Then the doctor came in on news about matilda, Beth:Is she ok Doctor:Matilda has done serious damage to her liver Scott:Will she make it Doctor:we do not know yet Beth:my little girl Doctor:matilda needs a liver transplant Beth:who from Doctor:we are waiting for a match Scott:what if there is no matches Doctor:that will be unknow yet, i am so sorry, Beth started crying tear drop after tear drop will matilda get the liver she needs or will she die a painful death. Then all the hunters cuddled each other. At the hostpital Flynn tries the best he can do to get james sacked. Later he tells the manager of the hostpital that he saw james planting pills in flynns locker then james goes to the managers office alongside flynn, Manger:dr.stone sit down James:whats up Manger:dr.suanders saw you planting drugs in his locker is that true James:no i swear Manager:his locker got trashed and drugs were found in there James:i swear i did not do it Manager:well im not sure i believe you james:what Manager:your fired james:watch out flynn you are going to get it James walked out of the managers office, The manager said "now we need to find a replacement" flynn had a smurk on his face but will he go even further and what did james mean watch out flynn you are going to get it. At the police station peter is back at work finding out places where rhys can be but claire is aware that he could be targerting family members, Claire:dont you think it is odd Peter:what is Claire:Rhys is targeting only family members why Peter:your guess is as good as mine claire:we need a list of family members Peter:why claire:so we can bring them back to summer bay where they would get the protection they need Peter:good idea Claire:oh my god peter:what Claire:i just sent you a text message Peter:how Claire:my phone got nicked by rhys Peter:so what does it say Claire:Im in summer bay but you will never guess where i will give you a clue im on top of something which is blue that is a good i will give you another clue "bland lax". Peter:bland lax Claire:I have got it Peter:what Claire:follow me They got in the police car and went to somewhere in summer bay but where. Meanwhlie it is night time in summer bay and diana and hayley dicided to tamper with irenes brakes on her car, Diana:are you done yet Hayley:one minutes Diana was starting to panic as hayley was struggling to do the brakes under the car. Finally hayley done it she cut the brakes, Hayley:tomorow irene will be a gonner Diana:excellent They walked back to the hotel the brakes were snapped on the car next time when irene drives it she could be a gonner... Promotion: Is it the end of sally and flynn... Sally:i want a divorce Flynn:what Also claire and peter confront rhys... Claire:wheres laura rhys:in the ocean Matilda is struggling for surrival but who will save her Beth:thnakyou so much but are you sure And there is a horror smash involving 5 summer bay favs... Irene:i can not stop it Kim:watch out Next time on home and away Fan fiction competition: Want to star in my fan fic as a villian who wants to get revenge on summer bay well the opputunitey is here. I need a back to the bay member to star in my fan fiction as a dangerous villian, rules: 1)you must be a bttb member 2)you are only aloud to vote once 3)The villians name will be dicided as soon as possible (hopefully screen names if possible) 4)entrys need to be in by augest 16th 2005 and i will be annoucing the winner that piticular day 5)you need to describe yourself in 10 words why you would be a great villian Have fun in this competiton and remember choose words that describe a villian... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noos Posted August 14, 2005 Report Share Posted August 14, 2005 hey! gr8 fic! i cannot wait to see what happens next! i especially love the fact that ur able to balance various events at the same time and keep them all exciting! keep up the gd work! noos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy Posted August 14, 2005 Report Share Posted August 14, 2005 Episode seven:A smash too far: Flynn got home from work and just saw sally sitting in the lounge alongside james with pippa and a bunch of papers, Flynn:Whats going on and what is he doing here Sally:i want a divorce Flynn:what Sally:im in love with james not with you Flynn:please sal just give me another chance Flynn touched sally's knne then sally slaped flynn round the face. His face was a red as a tomato, Sally:get out Flynn:just you wait i will get you flynn walked out furious. James and sally then cuddled. Flynn was so upset but what is he about to do that will change there lives forever? Meanwhlie at the hostpital matilda is still struggling for surrival but there is one person who can save her but who exactly, scott:she will be allright Beth:how do you know that Scott:because i have found our doner beth:you The doner was martha mckenzi she was going to give i little bit of her liver to matilda, Beth:thankyou so much but are you sure Martha:if it means saving maddie's life well i will do it beth and martha huggede scott was just smiling with joy whlie matilda was just lying there on her hostpital bed uncounsious. Claire and peter where at the docks and got on the blaxland. As peter and claire went down into the celler rhys locked the door and then got laura degroot out of the engine room, Claire:dammet his locked us in Peter:stand back Peter kicked the locked door down and saw rhys but no laura-where is kirsty's twin, Peter:this is the police Claire:where's laura Rhys:in the ocean Peter did not think about his actions and jumped off the boat. Claire was just standing there looking at rhys. Rhys suddenly then charged at her. Claire then fired her gun up in the air. Then rhys got her on the floor took her gun. Peter then came up with laura who was tied to a chair and found out the boat has gone from the harbour and into the ocean and going out to sea with claire but the question is-how far will rhys go? Meanwhlie Irene went in her car today to see oliva along with kim, barry, robbie and tasha. hayley and diana made up there excuses of not going too see her. They where driving along the road when suddenly irene could not stop, barry:what is wrong irene:the brakes there not working barry:push harder irene:i can not Kim:watch out They were on there side and went down the hill. The car capsides and all you could hear was tasha screaming... promotion: A dangerous car crash... Barry:wake up Has put there lives at risk... Barry:the car is caving in get out There is also a dramatic death as the car explodeds with someone inside... Barry:nooooooooooooooooo Also claire is starandered at sea with rhys the killer... claire:what are you going to do with me Rhys:your going to die a painful death but will peter reach claire in time... Peter:they are nowhere to be seen And a fire brakes out at the caravan park... Sally:pippa Next time on home and away... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kim-Hyde Posted August 14, 2005 Report Share Posted August 14, 2005 well done like the promo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy Posted August 15, 2005 Report Share Posted August 15, 2005 Episode eight:A fright night: The wreakage of the car was inpeckable there was smoke everywhere. Barry was the first one to get up and so was robbie, Barry:robbie Robbie:we need to get out the car is caving in Barry:ok i will get irene you get kim and tasha robbie pulled tasha out of the car. Barry was having diffuculty with irene as she would not wake up, Barry:wake up Robbie:i got tasha out The car suddenly went down as it started to cave in. The roof was getting closer to them as they moved, Robbie:Mr hyde you got to get out Barry:no im not leaving without irene or kim Robbie:get out now Barry:no Robbie was just standing there with tasha, looking at barry's face trying to get irene and kim out of the car. Then the car started to burn, Robbie;barry the car it is starting to burn quick get out Barry pulled irene out and left kim in the car-for now. he was racing to get kim out then the car suddenly exploded it pulled barry back, Barry:nooooooooooo Robbie pulled barry away from the burnt car, kim was dead in the car. His body was burning in the car. Meanwhlie somewhere at sea rhys has got the gun and held claire captured at sea but what is he going to do next, Claire:you will never get away with this rhys:but i believe i have Claire:what are you going to do with me Rhys:you are going to die a painful death Claire just looked at rhys and he pointed the gun at her but what will happen threw the night. At the caravan park, Somehow a fire mystriously lit at the caravan park. The place was burning down. Sally and james both woke up and found out the place was burning, sally:pippa Everybody got out saftley but who lit the fire... Promotion: Tick tock tick tock... Peter:claire stay with me Is it the end for claire brody... Claire:peter i can not do this anymore Will she surrive... Peter cries with sympathy... Also he died that painful death... Hayley:he died But he may not even be dead... Barry:the police do not find a body Irene:what Also who lit the fire at the caravan park... Sally:i think i know who did it Next time on home and away... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackieleanne Posted August 15, 2005 Report Share Posted August 15, 2005 Great chapters, Im really enjoying this fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liam99998204 Posted August 23, 2005 Report Share Posted August 23, 2005 I know im a bit late but is it too late to enter the villian competition?!? Liam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drew Posted September 10, 2005 Report Share Posted September 10, 2005 i love this fan fic... your a bit like Dan B lol but hey i love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laurie's top Fan Posted September 18, 2005 Report Share Posted September 18, 2005 Love it. Have you decided on a villain yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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