Jackieleanne Posted July 14, 2005 Report Share Posted July 14, 2005 Great chapter. Can't wait to read more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy Posted July 15, 2005 Report Share Posted July 15, 2005 chapter 66:six weeks later: courtman:jury have you reached a verdict jury:we have courtman:so do you find the defendent guilty or not guily of murder and posion jury:both guilty alf just frozed martha was going to jail. chris was murdered and posion then went off a cliff in a car and martha was wrongly accused of pushing him to his death and posioning him. courtman:martha mckenzi i setence you to life in prison take her away martha:grandad alf:what martha:please free me im begging you alf:i will do anything i can policeman:come on martha:help grandad alf was just shattered later at the prison, policeman:right smith meet your new cellmate sarah:right who are you martha:martha sarah:right martha that is my side that is yours martha:ok sarah:so what you in for martha:murder and posioning my ex boyfriend sarah:martha you will do just fine in here martha:how sarah;people will be nice to you and stuff martha was looking at the goodside of things. meanwhlie selina has came back the bay and already she has got a offer philip:do you want to come to the city with me selina:when philip:tonight selina:yeah sure philip:meet you about seven selina:ok bye philip:bye meanwhlie alf is trying to get in contact with morag (who is currently in prison) seeing if she can try and get morag on bail but it is hard to find morag in any prison in australia but morag is closer to martha than he thinks she is. at the prison, policeman:turn of the lights morag:margeret margeret:what morag:we need a plan margeret:to do what morag:escape plan margeret:where to morag:oh my god margeret:what morag:look at the paper margeret:where morag:there margeret:martha mckenzi setences to life, so morag:shes on e block margeret:what are you thinking morag:shes our key to escape from here margeret was smiling then they turned off the lights... NEXT TIME:ROMANCE IS IN THE AIR FOR SELINA AND PHILIP MARTHA FACES HER WORST NIGHTMARES (MORAG AND MARGERET) ALF TRIES TO FIND A CLUE TO MARTHAS INNOCENCES AND KIRSTY MAKES A DANGEROUS NEW ENEMY... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackieleanne Posted July 16, 2005 Report Share Posted July 16, 2005 Sounds great, I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy Posted July 16, 2005 Report Share Posted July 16, 2005 chapter 67:demons: policeman:come on breakfast martha:is he always this sticked sarah:get use to it martha walked out the cell when she saw morag and margeret martha:what are you doing here morag:martha please sit down martha:no margeret:come on martha martha:im not sitting down with a person who took a school hostage and another one who killed my boyfriend morag:we have got a plan martha:10 minutes martha morag margeret and sarah make there way to the cell martha:what is the plan morag:meet the rota martha:yeah so what margeret:us four our on kitchen duty sarah:so morag:that is our chance to escape martha:escape to where margeret:the bay martha was thinking will she take that risk. last night was a sucess for selina and philip and becoming really flirty around one another philip:i enjoyed last night selina:yeahwe had a laugh philip:do you want to do it again sometime selina:yeah sure well see you philip:bye meanwhlie alf was by the cliff looking for any clues for marthas innocence but then he came across a hair and a bottle that could put martha out of jail but will she escape. at collage kirsty made a new enemy today teacher:and what is the answer macka macka:ask the geek kirsty kirsty:hey macka:well you are kirsty;well at least im not a dumbass macka:right thats it teacher:right macka kirsty one more word then your suspended from doing your exams understand, understand both:yes miss teacher:off you go macka:im going to get you one way or another kirsty felt threatened... NEXT TIME:KIRSTY AND MACKA PLAY THE ROUGH GAME MARTHA SARAH MORAG AND MARGERET GET THE CHANCE TO ESCAPE WILL THEY TAKE THE RISK ALF GETS THE CLUE HE NEEDS AND PHILIP AND SELINAS DATE IN THE CITY ENDS IN TRAGEDY... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claire Posted July 16, 2005 Report Share Posted July 16, 2005 Wow, this fic's moving fast! 66 chapters already - roll on 100! The drama is great and I like that Irene and Barry are now married Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy Posted July 17, 2005 Report Share Posted July 17, 2005 chapter 68:play: kirsty:what macka:nothing kirsty:why do you keep on giving me nasty looks macka grab kirsty buy the throat macka:you made me look a fool in class kirsty:well why did you call me a geek macka:right that is it macka punched kirsty in the stomach but then kirsty bit mackas fingers and made them bleed, macka:i swear on my life kirsty you are going to pay one way or another kirsty:yeah well bring it on macka the teacher then walked threw the corridor macka:see you kirsty then when then the teacher went out of the corridor macka:in hell kirsty was looking stunned. meanwhlie in the kitchens at the prison margeret:quick outside and in the van sarah:ok morag:he will drive us out then martha:no you can't morag:yes i can the van started moving with the four ladies all in the back sarah:this is a bad idea margeret:shut up otherwise we will get cuaght the van drove out of the prison. when they stop becuse he heard a noise. the van driver opened the back door of his van and morag stabbed him in hurry. margeret:quick they drove off back to the bay but in summer bay alf has found the clue he needs to prove marthas innocence. he was looking at the crash sence where he found a lump of hair on the cliff. in the city selina and philips date went well and now there looking for where they parked there car selina:can you rember where you parked it philip:no selina:hey look i found it they approch the car where suddenly out of nowhere they were approched by 4 teenagers teen(1):hey nice car philip:thanks teen(2):give us the car and the chick teen(3):now philip:or what teen(4):this selina screamed in terror the teenager got her from behind and put her in the car. the car drove off really fast but philip was still in the city. selina:where are you taking me teen(1):you will see teen(2):our boss will be very happy selina looked in terror... NEXT TIME:SELINA IS IN GRAVE DANGER ALONG WITH PHILIP WILL THEY BE FOUND IN TIME, SOMEBODY GETS EXPELED FROM COLLAGE BUT WHO KIRSTY OR MACKA ALF FINDS OUT WHO THE KILLER IS AND MARTHA GETS HOLD OF A GUN... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackieleanne Posted July 17, 2005 Report Share Posted July 17, 2005 Great chapters, I can't wait to read more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy Posted July 17, 2005 Report Share Posted July 17, 2005 Chapter 69:secrets revealed: man:hey are you allright philip:selina she has been kidnapped man:this is more important you have been stabbed philip:selina she is in danger man:im ringing an ambulance philip:selina meanwhlie some unknown location selina is in a car which is inside a abondoned warehouse teen(1):get out selina:get of me teen(3):our boss wants to see you selina:who is your boss teen(4):you will find out boss:bring her in teen(2):yes boss selina:no it can not be you boss:did not expect me selina:what do you want jack boss:you selina:well you can not boss:yes i can your boyfriend is history selina:his not my boyfriend boss:better reason to be mine selina:no boss:tie her up teen(1):yes sir boss:that will teach you to stop messing with jack the lad selina:help someone help boss:nobody can here you selina:you are a rotton fat pig jack then slaped selina across the face boss:shut up selina was looking in terror philip was trying to get his point of view across and who would save selina before it is too late. at the collage the owner wanted a word with macka owner:right macka macka:what owner:kirsty and miss birley have made a complaint about you outragous behavour i have no choice but to expell you from this collage macka:but you can't owner:but i can macka:kirsty and miss birley are going to pay macka then walked out of the collage. meanwhlie margeret stop at ian osbournes place morag:we need some cash martha:ians dead margeret:his cash is not sarah:come on martha margeret:look a safe morag:get the code margeret:easy money morag:right 2,500 each sarah:yes aboard here i come martha was looking round when she came across a celler. she bust the door down and saw a gun. she then took it with out the others knowing, sarah:where to now margeret:you will see they drove off. at the hostpital alf got the dna results for the hair the bottle and they all add up to the same person the killer is chris (himself) but why did he do it... NEXT TIME:SELINA IS IN GRAVE DANGER BUT WHO SAVES HER MEANWHLIE TWO PEOPLE ARE FOUND DEAD BUT WHO... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackieleanne Posted July 20, 2005 Report Share Posted July 20, 2005 Great chapter, I will have to catch up with this fic as soon as I am back from holiday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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