Red Ranger 1 Posted October 22, 2021 Report Share Posted October 22, 2021 On 17/10/2021 at 03:41, Zig said: Omg Vj the father. I won't lie I always wanted then to be together. On 17/10/2021 at 03:47, Kristen said: oh VJ is the father interesting twist. Glad you liked that. I must admit, I wasn't really in favour of it at the time: Coco was too young, it was too soon after Billie... But as time's gone on, I found myself wondering what would happen if they ran into each other again when they were older. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 24, 2021 Report Share Posted October 24, 2021 (edited) Great chapter Bella and Ryder supporting Coco Ryder knows VJ? I didn't think they ever met in the show Ziggy handling the news fairly well about VJ being the father Update again soon Edited October 24, 2021 by Kristen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beachside Posted October 26, 2021 Report Share Posted October 26, 2021 Loved these last couple of chapters. Pleased that Bella and Ryder are supporting Coco. Ziggy is calm which is good for Coco. Wonder if VJ will find out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 30, 2021 Report Share Posted October 30, 2021 On 24/10/2021 at 03:34, Kristen said: Ryder knows VJ? I didn't think they ever met in the show I think practically Ryder's first scene was with VJ, when he was caught stealing from the surf club. On 26/10/2021 at 11:12, beachside said: Pleased that Bella and Ryder are supporting Coco. Yep, since I'd got them in the story I thought I needed to have them do that! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 30, 2021 Report Share Posted October 30, 2021 (edited) Great chapter Good VJ knows now. Leah being supportive Ben and Maggie wanting to rush to Coco but glad Coco told them to hold of for now Update again soon Edited October 30, 2021 by Kristen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helena Posted October 30, 2021 Report Share Posted October 30, 2021 (edited) I really enjoyed this chapter of the story. So Ziggy and Coco told Ben and Maggie about the baby and Coco also told VJ and VJ also told Leah. I guess it won't be long until everyone else finds out. Looking forward to reading more. Edited November 1, 2021 by QUIET ACHIEVER SPAG and capital letters for people's names! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beachside Posted November 3, 2021 Report Share Posted November 3, 2021 Glad that VJ knows now hopefully he comes to the bay. Leah's right and I am glad Coco finally told Ben and Maggie. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 3, 2021 Report Share Posted November 3, 2021 On 31/10/2021 at 00:11, Kristen said: Good VJ knows now. Leah being supportive Ben and Maggie wanting to rush to Coco but glad Coco told them to hold of for now On 31/10/2021 at 00:15, Helena said: So Ziggy and Coco told Ben and Maggie about the baby and Coco also told VJ and VJ also told Leah. I guess it won't be long until everyone else finds out. 52 minutes ago, beachside said: Glad that VJ knows now hopefully he comes to the bay. Leah's right and I am glad Coco finally told Ben and Maggie. Thanks for the comments, all of you! Yes, I thought it was about time that everyone got filled in! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helena Posted November 4, 2021 Report Share Posted November 4, 2021 (edited) I really enjoyed this of the story. So Coco was alone at home and then VJ turned up and told her that he loves her and that he will stand for her and the baby. I also enjoyed the scene with Leah and Luc and Irene and Ziggy. I also enjoyed Ziggy stepping up and being a parental figure towards Coco. Looking forward to reading more. Edited November 4, 2021 by QUIET ACHIEVER Use your punctuation for sentences and capital letters for names! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 4, 2021 Report Share Posted November 4, 2021 (edited) Great chapter VJ turns up and Coco was home alone oh dear Little Luc with Leah Ziggy walks in on them basically Update again soon Edited November 4, 2021 by Kristen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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