Homecoming Part 4 (by Summer's Bay) - comments

[Guest]

Great chapter

hmm Carly is on edge with Ben.

Steve seemed a bit off.

Celia asking Michael if he is having an affair that was close he could of ruined it all for Alf.

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[Guest]

Great chapter

Oh a bit awkward between Bob and Debra.

Jonathon visiting Craig to break up/take a break.

whoa at the last part.

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[Guest]

Great chapter

oh so Craig killed himself

Karen feeling bad well she should but will anyone tell Don who the bully is.

Michael  confronting Alf.

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[Red Ranger 1]

Wow, I didn't expect you to actually kill Craig.And still everyone keeps quiet.

[Guest]

Great chapter

Carly dump Ben already

Frank got himself in to a spot of trouble and paid for it.

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Edited December 12, 2019 by Kristen

[Red Ranger 1]

I'm a bit confused as to whether Sam has called Pippa or not... I thought Steven was going to tell Donald but then he chickened out. Alf trying to get things back on track.

[Guest]

Great chapter 

I don’t understand why Sam called Pippa or felt the need too.

Steven should of told Donald the truth about Karen bullying Craig.

Glad Carly told Bobby about Frank.

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Edited December 13, 2019 by Kristen

[Summer's Bay]

On 13/12/2019 at 03:38, Red Ranger 1 said:

I'm a bit confused as to whether Sam has called Pippa or not... I thought Steven was going to tell Donald but then he chickened out. Alf trying to get things back on track.

Yes she did. She just never mentioned her name just that she was a friend of Franks

On 13/12/2019 at 04:45, Kristen said:

Great chapter 

I don’t understand why Sam called Pippa or felt the need too.

Steven should of told Donald the truth about Karen bullying Craig.

Glad Carly told Bobby about Frank.

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Sam believes that everything happens for a reason. Earlier in the fan fiction she said that her and Frank meeting must be for a reason. Sam felt that the envelope falling out of the bag was a sign for something..which she later on felt was a sign for her to call Australia..which ended up being a blessing in disguise for Pippa. 

 

 

Thank you for reading. I should have a chapter up by tonight, or tomorrow . 

Edited December 17, 2019 by Summer's Bay

[Guest]

Great chapter 

I hope Karen comes forward soon

Ben is such a A-hole poor Carly

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Edited December 22, 2019 by Kristen

[Red Ranger 1]

I'm glad Pippa told the other kids what's going on. What is Ben hiding now?