christine king Posted August 3, 2019 Report Share Posted August 3, 2019 Story Title: Open minds and Open hearts Type of story: Medium Fic Main Characters: Raffy, Ryder, Bella, Coco, Ben, Maggie, Alf, Roo, Irene, Leah, John, Marilyn, Justin, Mason, Tori, Brody, Colby Other Characters: Leia, Luke, Theo BTTB Rating: T/A Genre: Drama/Romance/Family/General Does story include spoilers: no Any warnings: violence Summary: When new girl Leia arrives their is trouble coming but how will the teenagers handle her? And when more secrets and lies are revealed just who is this girl really? Chapter 1 Their is a girl sitting in the passenger seat of a car, the car is driving up a road and they came across a sign saying “welcome to the bay”, the Dad nudges the girl awake and informs her they are finally here. The girl sits up and smiles at her Dad saying “about time”, the Dad smiles back and says “be good for once”, the girl just winks at him and says “I’ll try my best”. Later at their new house Leia and Theo walk into their new house. Theo: so what do you think? Leia: I love it! Theo: really? Leia: no it needs a bit of work but I know it’ll be fine for now Theo: glad you kind of approve Leia: I don’t get much of a choice Theo: hey you never gave me one either! Leia: is this about Luke? Theo: of course it’s about that boy! I tried to warn you he was no good but did you listen no and now look where we are! Leia: don’t worry he’ll be here soon enough Theo: wait you told him where we were? Leia: of course, he’s my boyfriend! Theo: you told me you dumped him! Leia: no I didn’t you just assumed that! Theo: and you we’re all too happy to let me believe that! Leia: well yeah! Chill Dad! Theo: no! You lied to me! You disobeyed me! Leia: seriously?! I’m a teenager what did you expect me to do?! Theo: how about you try being a good person for once! Leia: how about you let me live my life for once! Theo: you know your right, I’m just your father, no one special, you don’t need me or my money or a roof over your head or clothes to wear or food to eat or water to drink, your fine on your own or with that boy. Whatever I’m done, have a nice life. Theo bails from the house leaving Leia alone... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 4, 2019 Report Share Posted August 4, 2019 Great start I look forward to more. Update again soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted August 4, 2019 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2019 2 hours ago, Kristen said: Great start I look forward to more. Update again soon Thank you. Glad you like it. I will update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.B Posted August 4, 2019 Report Share Posted August 4, 2019 Really good start, Christine. Though it looks like all isn't well with this family. I wonder what this Luke has done for Theo to greatly dislike him for, and I liked Leia's cheeky dialogue. I look forward to seeing more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted August 4, 2019 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2019 Just now, D.B said: Really good start, Christine. Though it looks like all isn't well with this family. I wonder what this Luke has done for Theo to greatly dislike him for, and I liked Leia's cheeky dialogue. I look forward to seeing more. Glad you like it. All will be revealed in time. Keep reading Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chair Posted August 4, 2019 Report Share Posted August 4, 2019 Thanks for a great fanfic Christine. I am enjoying it so far. I like the characters of Theo and Leia. I look forward to seeing more of them and finding out why Luke has upset Theo so much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted August 5, 2019 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2019 5 hours ago, chair said: Thanks for a great fanfic Christine. I am enjoying it so far. I like the characters of Theo and Leia. I look forward to seeing more of them and finding out why Luke has upset Theo so much. Glad you like it. I’ll update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted November 8, 2019 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2019 Omg guys I’m so sorry I forget about this story. Life has just been so hetric. I promise to update this now. Chapter 2. The Beach Raffy and Ryder are laying on towels after their swim. Raffy: so you looking forward to this new school year? Ryder: well we’re together so yeah I couldn’t be happier Raffy: I wish Coco was here Ryder: me too! I miss her Raffy: but we have each other and we’re together and happy Ryder: yeah we are and nothings going to break us Raffy: I love you Ryder: I love you too They kiss but Bella interrupts their moment Bella: hey guys Ryder and Raffy: hey Bella: what you guys doing? Raffy: not much Ryder: just chilling Raffy: what you up too? Bella: going to yabbie creek with Colby Ryder: shopping? Bella: school stuff, boring! Can we hang instead? Raffy: haha nice try. Colby might just kill us if we let you stay! Bella: oh it was worth a shot. Pool later though? Ryder: definitely Raffy: for sure! Bella: bye guys Raffy and Ryder get ready to bail but they see a girl walking the beach in the distance... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 9, 2019 Report Share Posted November 9, 2019 Great chapter Raffy/Ryder are so cute. oh who is that mysterious girl? Update again soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted November 9, 2019 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2019 25 minutes ago, Kristen said: Great chapter Raffy/Ryder are so cute. oh who is that mysterious girl? Update again soon Thanks. It’s Leia of course I will update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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