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On 4 May 2018 at 10:32, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Great chapter

Loved Denny and Ricky's chat

Update soon please xx

 

On 3 May 2018 at 21:29, Kristen said:

Good chapter 

nice chat between Denny and Ricky

Kyle and Tamara are together? I like it.

Update again soon :)

 

On 4 May 2018 at 07:38, Suzza101 said:

Great chapter,

nice chat between Denny and Ricky, poor Ricky is so lost! I love Kyle and Tamara as a couple, 

Can’t wait for the nect chapter!!!

Thanks Kristen, JarlieFanEver and Suzza101, I'm really happy you're all loving this. I hope to update as soon as I can!null

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So Ricky dated Chris and ash interesting choice even though Ricky misses brax it's great to see her happy I always loved Ricky and dennys friendship I miss them both but at least Ricky can return sadly denny is dead 

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29 minutes ago, [email protected] said:

So Ricky dated Chris and ash interesting choice even though Ricky misses brax it's great to see her happy I always loved Ricky and dennys friendship I miss them both but at least Ricky can return sadly denny is dead 

I miss them so much as well! Especially Denny, who I think had so much more potential than what she had. 

Also I'm afraid there's a bit of mix up: it was Denny who I said dated Chris and Ash, not Ricky, but thanks so much for commenting!

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Great chapter 

Liking the friendship between Ricky and Denny

Oh so Denny dated Chris and Ash I did not see that coming 

Update again soon  :)

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Smiled a bit at Josh and Brody being gay.So Denny dated Chris and Ash (like she did in the show, albeit not in that order...) but now might be having feelings for Ricky? You're writing it very naturally although I'm surprised at Ricky working at the bait shop! Liking all the old characters in this.

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