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49 minutes ago, pembie said:

Will you be finishing this story DB? 

I will, sorry guys, I've been having some really tough weeks, and it was so busy, but don't worry I've been working on a new chapter this week and it'll be updated soon. So thanks again for all your patience.

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Loved Brax's internal monologue: He really didn't seem to be getting it!

Looking forward to more!

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Great chapter 

Brax knows about Denny and Ricky 

Kyle knows Brax is back

Update again soon :) 

 

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Well their all having a fun sit down and catch up home warming aren't they? Kyle should pop out get a nice slice of mud pie or the famous red pepper pot haha

Isn't Josh with Brody in this story as well Brax's little mind is going to be blown apart  

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Yep but I can't say I feel that sorry for Brax I never have haha

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Unless he dies maybe saving Ricky and Denny from Jake's gang

Next chapter around Christmas time You know that's panto season too so all I will say is OH NO IT WON'T BE But I guess I'm wrong and you are right You know when you get the time to write lol

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Great chapter

Lovely bonding moment between Brax and Kyle and Denny and Ricky.

I look forward to the next chapter around Christmas time.

Update again soon :) 

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