Red Ranger 1 Posted January 20, 2018 Report Share Posted January 20, 2018 Had a feeling Steven and Rebecca would oversleep... Sally hiding the fact that Roo phoned Frank is a bit mean. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaptainHulk Posted January 20, 2018 Report Share Posted January 20, 2018 Sal is probably still bitter at this point but that's a brat thing to do. Funny, I see Danielle Carter Rebecca crossing swords with Matt but I see Jane Hall Rebecca getting the 3rd Degree off Don! ? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 21, 2018 Report Share Posted January 21, 2018 Great chapter Danny trying to strangle Sally Frank shouldn't of hit him. Danny is crazy hurting himself even more and blaming it on Frank the fact Bobby believes him over Frank is disgusting. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KKB Posted January 21, 2018 Report Share Posted January 21, 2018 Great Chapter. Tense phone call between Roo and Alf Well written with the stuff re Frank/Sally/Danny the Diner scream. Update soon 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted January 21, 2018 Report Share Posted January 21, 2018 Great chapters Not impressed at how Sally had lied about the phone call Danny seemed really obsessive about not wanting Bobby to talk to Frank Whoa can't believe Danny tried to strangle Sally Can't believe that Bobby didn't believe Frank when he said he didn't do that to Danny Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 21, 2018 Report Share Posted January 21, 2018 Danny being very manipulative.This is not going to go well... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KKB Posted January 22, 2018 Report Share Posted January 22, 2018 Danny is so annoying. Update soon 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 22, 2018 Report Share Posted January 22, 2018 Great chapter Danny please go away. Liked the Steve and Rebecca scene. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 22, 2018 Report Share Posted January 22, 2018 Still not clear what Matt and Rebecca are hiding... Could be trouble for everyone here. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Summer's Bay Posted January 22, 2018 Report Share Posted January 22, 2018 (edited) Thank you for reading. I hope you are still enjoying. I am trying to keep the characters as true to the show as possible, in terms of language and behaviour, except for Matt. I am hoping to keep the story going until present day , not necessarily every day until now but for the most part. I will touch on some of the storylines that happened to the main characters here, I will use them as a template but put my spin on them. Please let me know if you have any questions The next chapter will be posted later today. Edited January 22, 2018 by Summer's Bay Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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