Red Ranger 1 Posted October 25, 2018 Report Share Posted October 25, 2018 Ryder wanting to be a police officer is a shocker and still no idea what's going on with Marilyn... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 25, 2018 Report Share Posted October 25, 2018 Great chapter Surprised that Ryder wanted to be a police officer Wondering what is going on with Marilyn Looking forwards to the next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FootyKick Posted October 26, 2018 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2018 Thanks everyone for the feedback. Next chapter should be out tonight, if not tomorrow morning Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FootyKick Posted October 26, 2018 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2018 Chapter Three Warning of mild violence (Palmer House) "Oh Marilyn, good your home, we need to have a chat" said John. "Can I please speak first John, I am really sorry for the way I have been treating you lately darling, with me just snapping out" replied Marilyn. "Thanks, Maz, but I think to be on the safe side, we should get you checked out at the hospital" said John. "Are you sure about that John?" asked Marilyn. "I think it's for the best Marilyn" replied John. (Morgan House) "Hey Raffy, is Justin around?, I just need to have a chat with him? asked Colby. "He's just at the garage but should be back in an hour or two" said Raffy. "That's ok, I can wait" replied Colby. (Police Station) "Hey guys, how can I help you?" asked Sergeant Georgina Watson. "Hi love, young Ryder would like to ask you something" said Alf. "Yeah, what is it? asked Watson. "Come on Ryder, we don't have all day" said Roo. "Sergeant, I would like to enrol into the police academy and I was hoping I could speak to you about it?" asked Ryder. "Ryder, are you sure that this is what you want to do?, you're not the first person who's asked me this question" said Watson. "I'm ready" "Alright then, come this way" (Morgan House) An upset Colby has been raiding the Morgans wine and is drunk. "Hey Colby, Justin's just messaged, and he won't be back until later, if you want to come back in the morning...? asked Raffy. "No thanks, I'll stay here" replied Colby bluntly. "Colby, you're drunk, and I know you miss Chelsea, but please just leave ok" insisted Raffy. Not thinking clearly, Colby leans in and attempts to kiss Raffy. Raffy fights back and hits him, leaving Colby with a bloodied nose. Colby quickly makes a run. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 26, 2018 Report Share Posted October 26, 2018 Great chapter Good Marilyn agreed to go to hospital Oh no Colby tried to kiss Raffy hmm that might put a damper on things Update again soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 26, 2018 Report Share Posted October 26, 2018 I assumed Marilyn knew something and was hiding it, but looks like possibly not. And Raffy was not all that receptive to Colby! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 26, 2018 Report Share Posted October 26, 2018 Great chapter Surprised that Colby tried to kiss Raffy but good on her for defending herself Looking forwards to the next chapter xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.B Posted October 27, 2018 Report Share Posted October 27, 2018 Nice two chapters! I was surprised at Marilyn's earlier attitude towards John, but it's good to see that she apologised. I wonder if what will show when they go to the hospital. Ryder becoming an officer is a surprise, but a nice one, and of course, it's always good to see the reappearance of one of my favourites, Sergeant Georgina Watson! I honestly didn't expect Colby to actually kiss Raffy, ! He's definitely not in the right head-space, so I'm glad Raffy defended herself. I look forward to more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted October 28, 2018 Report Share Posted October 28, 2018 Its a surprise that's Roo or even Leah haven't put up a fight about Ryder wanting to join the police will his first arrest be Colby? Who by the way is dicing with death drinking all the Morgan's wine Brody might of needed that for one of his fancy meals Never get on the bad side of a chef there are alot of sharp and pointy things in a kitchen I was going to say is it time of the month for Marilyn? haha But with a trip to the hospital maybe its abit more than that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FootyKick Posted October 29, 2018 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2018 Thanks everyone for all the feedback, will have the next chapter out tonight! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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