Red Ranger 1 Posted October 13, 2016 Report Share Posted October 13, 2016 The girls seem to have put a lot of thought into this, see how it works out... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 14, 2016 Report Share Posted October 14, 2016 Great chapter Liked the girls idea to prank the boys Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted October 14, 2016 Report Share Posted October 14, 2016 Great chapter! Really liked all the boys supporting Kyle while he tries to learn to surf. It must be hard for him to admit to everyone that he was in care because, as he said, there are always more questions, and he obviously doesn't want to talk about his mum's death. Looking forward to the next chapter x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 14, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2016 Awesome chapter Liked the part when the boys all supported Kyle when he tried to surf Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 14, 2016 Report Share Posted October 14, 2016 Great chapter Liked the boys teaching Kyle to surf. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 14, 2016 Report Share Posted October 14, 2016 I was going to say that Kyle seemed to have a bad experience surfing but then he had an even worse experience letting slip private information.Interested to see where you take this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 15, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2016 Great chapter Oh dear! Poor Casey! The boys not believing him when he sensed that they are beginning watched by someone Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted October 15, 2016 Report Share Posted October 15, 2016 Ooh interesting! I'm glad Casey has figured out that they're being watched. Pity the other guys don't believe him 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 15, 2016 Report Share Posted October 15, 2016 Ray's really not up on the covert thing, is he? Looking forward to more! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 16, 2016 Report Share Posted October 16, 2016 Great chapter Poor Casey no one believing him. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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