pembie Posted November 3, 2017 Report Share Posted November 3, 2017 Quite a few characters there that I wouldn't think of Kyle going to see upon his return But its good his got Brody and Matt helping him with Salt This only a one shot? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted November 3, 2017 Report Share Posted November 3, 2017 Kyle seems to have found his feet very easily on his return to Summer Bay, with everyone welcoming him with open arms, and telling him how much they prefer him to his brothers... That's nice. Sounds like he's in the money too! And well sorted for staff, what with Brody being happy to take a job in his old restaurant, and Matt having ditched his girlfriend and his sister to come back home. Feel bad for Ellie having to go back to Aunt May though. Nice one shot. 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 3, 2017 Report Share Posted November 3, 2017 (edited) Great start glad everyone welcomed Kyle back with open arms. Matt and Evie parting ways. feel sorry for Ellie going back to Aunt May Edited November 7, 2017 by Kristen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted November 3, 2017 Report Share Posted November 3, 2017 Great one-shot glad that Kyle got out and that everyone welcomed him back. Sad that Matt and Evie broke up and poor Ellie for having to go back to Aunt May. Once again a really good read 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted November 3, 2017 Report Share Posted November 3, 2017 Great start to this fanfiction Liked how Kyle was welcomed back with open arms Aww pity about Matt and Evelyn parting ways, and Ellie going back to live with Aunty Mary Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 5, 2017 Report Share Posted November 5, 2017 Nice one-shot with Kyle doing a tour of the town.It's good that Alf and Roo helped him out and that he seems to be set up.Shame things don't seem to have worked out for Matt though... 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted November 7, 2017 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2017 Billie's quite the ninja isn't she? Sneaking into Kyle's cell she tunnel in or somehow get the keys from one of the garuds? Haha Aunt May I kept expecting Peter Parker to show up Scary Mick took the news that Kyle wanted to rip him apart surprising well Wouldn't flying in a hot air balloon be great? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 7, 2017 Report Share Posted November 7, 2017 Billie sneaking into Kyle's cell well that's quite a twist that Kyle is Luc's father instead of Mick or VJ. Glad Kyle and Phoebe reunited. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted November 7, 2017 Report Share Posted November 7, 2017 Liked the ending to this fanfiction Liked the twist that Kyle is Luc's dad, not Mick neither VJ Thank you for sharing it with us, j.laur5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted November 7, 2017 Report Share Posted November 7, 2017 (edited) Billie's got some serious skills to get in and out of the prison unnoticed like that! And all for a bit of 'special time' with Kyle! Did she get in the same way that Ash did? Through the air vents? Did he draw her a map? Surprising that Mick backed off as easily as he did but it's nice that things have worked out so well for everyone Kyle's got the family he always wanted. Edited November 7, 2017 by Ludub 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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