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Great chapter 

oh a dark and violent Decker 

Ziggy as a fairy helping Brody save his mum.

Update again soon :)

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1 hour ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Oh gosh! All felt a bit Poltergeist at the end there.So Ziggy the fairy has made Brody's imagination come true?Does this include a certain clown..?

yeah the clown is one of Brodys hallucinations

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Oh, I really enjoyed this very different chapter! As you say, very dark (especially for you). Interesting that Brody's coping mechanisms have manifested in real life to defend him and his mother against an abusive father. But that begs the question, did he kill his dad himself? And this whole clown thing is his way of coping with the guilt? Love that it's blind Freddie too! And Decker is indeed an interesting choice as Brody's dad. Love this!

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Well, leaving her gun behind doesn't seem to have slowed Kat down... Shame Raffy and Coco's rescue mission was foiled by the universe ceasing to exist around them.Don't you hate it when that happens? Seems like everyone's going down the tunnels!

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Well..... Kat is doing a bang up job! Not worried about who stole her gun (again!) because she's packing much more impressive heat in the boot of her car? Okay then... I'm wondering now what actually happened to Zannis, Robbo, and Lena, unlike Kat (who couldn't be bothered reading the case file!) Not sure why McCarthy would be worried about case files getting dirty when he runs such a shoddy operation himself. If the very best cop he has is Kat Chapman then god save us! And it is indeed a pity that Raffy's rescue plan went wrong. It all seemed so simple! That was until Brody's imagination threw up a completely different challenge! This story is so weird... Loving it though!  haha!

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Great chapter 

Wow Kat is a terrible police officer not worrying about who stole her gun

Shame Raffy and Coco's plan failed

Update again soon :)

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Brody's imagination [and your own] are indeed quite intriguing ......and I mena that in a good way .....

 

...here's hoping Brody's imagination throws Raffy and Coco a lifeline [after throwing them one heck of a curve ball in this latest chapter !!!!]

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So...it really is the whole of reality? Okay... Sheer insanity as ever. Heath and Kyle as gnomes who, um, get eaten by Buddy.Ash about to be eaten by a weird white fluffy ball thing.Kat in a hall of mirrors, Justin and Scarlett in a maze...Bonkers.

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