pembie Posted October 7, 2017 Report Share Posted October 7, 2017 (edited) Oh my goodness All shook up indeed that this is only going to be a three parter.. Oh and Brody you like him so I'm in for the rumble of this story Dam this working overtime sorting the rosters did they manage to finish them because that hardly matters now. At least Phoebe won't be treating Brody to her singing while down in the darkness not with a broken back so there are small mercys to be had... Edited October 7, 2017 by pembie 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 7, 2017 Report Share Posted October 7, 2017 Great start to this fanfiction Looking forwards to the next chapter xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kellicopter Posted October 7, 2017 Report Share Posted October 7, 2017 I'm intrigued to see how you're going to stop at 3 chapters love it though! Very realistic - although how did Brody end up on top on Phoebe in the first place? 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bijou Posted October 8, 2017 Report Share Posted October 8, 2017 Interesting concept you do like to hurt Brody in your stories don't you 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted October 8, 2017 Report Share Posted October 8, 2017 19 minutes ago, bijou said: You do like to hurt Brody in your stories don't you To be fair, I hurt all the characters I like. You have to care about a character to care that they're hurting. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 8, 2017 Report Share Posted October 8, 2017 Interesting idea and there's potential for a good short story here.Looking forward to seeing where you take it! 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 9, 2017 Report Share Posted October 9, 2017 Great start I do hope someone will find Brody and Phoebe. I hope they will be alright. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 9, 2017 Report Share Posted October 9, 2017 Great chapter Oh a twist Brody told Phoebe he’s in love with her. Wonder if anyone is alive besides Brody and Phoebe. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kellicopter Posted October 9, 2017 Report Share Posted October 9, 2017 Oooooooh straight on in for the kill. I wonder if you've actually killed the whole bay Go on Brody lad! We could all use someone who can talk about his feelings! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted October 9, 2017 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2017 (edited) Hmmm I'm going against the grain and I'm going to say its not the best time to confess your love for your brothers girlfriend while being trapped with nowhere to go But I guess its worth the punt Brody doesn't really understand the whole bro code rule in many of these stories on here does he? But you like Brody so I'm sure you will bring him happiness Edited October 9, 2017 by pembie 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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