sallyandflynnfan Posted September 30, 2017 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2017 51 minutes ago, Kristen said: Liked the idea of Kyle and Billie meeting as teenagers and they are both in a band. Update again soon Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sallyandflynnfan Posted September 30, 2017 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2017 Chapter 4 Seventeen year old Flynn Saunders was new to Summer Bay high. His parents moved to the bay for one reason so he had a better chance at life. He walked onto the Summer Bay high Basketball court when he saw some boys playing and girls watching on. He stood there still when another girl walked in the gates and went over to him. I don't think i have seemed you before she said, you wouldn't of im new here, Well my name Sally Fletcher she said Flynn Saunders he repiled. How about we stop watching this and I will show you around she said, sounds like a plan lets go he repiled as they walked away from the court and towards the school building Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 30, 2017 Report Share Posted September 30, 2017 Great chapter Liked Sally meeting Flynn. I like the collection of love stories so far Update again soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sallyandflynnfan Posted September 30, 2017 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2017 4 minutes ago, Kristen said: Great chapter Liked Sally meeting Flynn. I like the collection of love stories so far Update again soon Thanks hopefully u like then all. Meeting each other only the start for all these stories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sallyandflynnfan Posted September 30, 2017 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2017 Chapter 5 15 year old Casey Braxton was walking along the rocks in mangrove river when he spotted a girl sitting there but he didn't know her so he looked at her and was about to walk away when she spoke You wouldn't know where i could find a place for my mum and I too stay she asked, Yeah I can take you there if you like Casey replied, Ok sure she responded My name Denny Miller she said I'm Casey Braxton he repiled as sne got up and they walked towards the hotel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 30, 2017 Report Share Posted September 30, 2017 Great chapter Liked Casey meeting Denny I look forward to where these stories go after the initial meeting. Update again soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted September 30, 2017 Report Share Posted September 30, 2017 I liked Flynn meeting Sally. Also intresting how Casey and Denny met each other too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sallyandflynnfan Posted September 30, 2017 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2017 Chapter 6 Thirteen year old Selina Cook was musking around in the water at the Beach in Summer Bay as she wanted to get a feel for the place it was her first day in town after running away from home as her parents hurt her when she saw a kid slightly older walk towards the water and he stood next to her. Hi she said to him, Hey are you new in town he asked, Yeah I am my name Selina i ran away from home because my parents hurt me, Well I'm Steven he said I in year 10 at the high school how about I take you to someone who can look after you, ok Selina repiled smiling at Steven. They walked to Irene house and soon enough she Fostered Selina. Thanks Steven for finding me somewhere to go Selina said to him, that alright he repiled as he walked out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sallyandflynnfan Posted September 30, 2017 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2017 42 minutes ago, christine king said: I liked Flynn meeting Sally. Also intresting how Casey and Denny met each other too. Glad you liked both meeting 57 minutes ago, Kristen said: Great chapter Liked Casey meeting Denny I look forward to where these stories go after the initial meeting. Update again soon Thanks glad your liking it. So am I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 30, 2017 Report Share Posted September 30, 2017 Interesting idea but the chapters are a bit short and the story seems a bit disconnected so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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