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Okay, that's pretty funny! :lol: After your last comment I was trying to think of a situation in which they could have had a quickie... would have been an interesting sight for the guards to come back to! You know what they say 'if this van's a rockin', don't come a knockin'!' :lol: Like the idea of Kyle and Ricky together. That makes sense! And weirdly, I kinda like Josh with Phoebe as a couple, which I really wasn't expecting to. Interested to see where you go with it... And V3?! haha! Love it!

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Great chapter 

That was really funny a quickie in a prison van.

Liked the idea of Ricky and Kyle.

V3 that's a funny name :lol:

Update again soon :)

 

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Nice chapter

I guess VJ and Billie were too busy tending to their vegtables and it was because of that reason why their son ended up with a name that might just come out of Star Wars as one of the androids V3 :lol:

I see Oscar's still around Funny how we all write him as being still alive haha

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  On 29/06/2017 at 20:37, Ludub said:

Okay, that's pretty funny! :lol: After your last comment I was trying to think of a situation in which they could have had a quickie... would have been an interesting sight for the guards to come back to! You know what they say 'if this van's a rockin', don't come a knockin'!' :lol: And weirdly, I kinda like Josh with Phoebe as a couple, which I really wasn't expecting to.

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  On 29/06/2017 at 22:05, Kristen said:

That was really funny a quickie in a prison van.

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Glad you liked it.My brain came up with the slightly bonkers idea of "What if Josh and Phoebe had a child together in prison?", which was slightly hampered by the fact that they'd be in different prisons.I tossed around a few ideas (I seem to recall one of them involved a mixed prison work detail!) and this one stuck.And yeah, I kind of like them together as well, I think they're one of my Crack Pairings...

 

  On 29/06/2017 at 20:37, Ludub said:

Like the idea of Kyle and Ricky together. That makes sense!

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  On 29/06/2017 at 22:05, Kristen said:

Liked the idea of Ricky and Kyle.

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Wasn't sure how that one would go down but since I had them and Casey as a makeshift family it seemed like a natural progression.

 

  On 29/06/2017 at 20:37, Ludub said:

And V3?! haha! Love it!

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  On 29/06/2017 at 22:05, Kristen said:

V3 that's a funny name :lol:

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  On 30/06/2017 at 11:19, pembie said:

I guess VJ and Billie were too busy tending to their vegtables and it was because of that reason why their son ended up with a name that might just come out of Star Wars as one of the androids V3 :lol:

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Again, I'd set up the idea in the first fic where Billie told VJ he could name their next son after himself and his father.I didn't want to go down the route of calling someone with a name like that "Trip" so I thought "Hmm, VJ...V3!" Then just treat it like it's normal...It does get touched on in a flashback later.

 

  On 30/06/2017 at 11:19, pembie said:

I see Oscar's still around Funny how we all write him as being still alive haha

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As I mentioned last time round, even though as a rule I'm against resurrecting dead characters, in Oscar's case I took a lot of satisfaction in finding a way to do it...

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Great chapter

Haha loved the part in the prison van :lol:

Liked the idea of Kyle and Ricky :D As you know I had been considering having them end up as a couple in my fanfiction Life At Summer Bay but I changed my mind at the last minute, lol. :P

Update soon please xx

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Nice touch with Inspector Watson …. A GREAT ode to the AWESOME Georgina !!!!

 

Good that the whole Phoebe, Josh kid was explained. LOOOVE that VJ and Billie called one of their kids V3.

 

Also loved ……“Well, this is Summer Bay, land of the second chances.” And the VERY parental ““That’s enough, Vincent Patterson III,”Billie warned him

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  On 30/06/2017 at 21:56, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Liked the idea of Kyle and Ricky :D As you know I had been considering having them end up as a couple in my fanfiction Life At Summer Bay but I changed my mind at the last minute, lol. :P

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Glad you liked it, Jarliefan.I know you'd debated it at one point.

 

  On 01/07/2017 at 02:32, JosieTash said:

Nice touch with Inspector Watson …. A GREAT ode to the AWESOME Georgina !!!!

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I didn't realise I mentioned her so early: There's a few Inspector Watson mentions coming and I had to go back and check they all match!

Next chapter will probably be up tomorrow (Sunday).

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Ah Red :) I absolutely loved this chapter!

Loved the flashbacks to the conversation between Phoebe and the warden, and between Kyle Ricky and Josh, about the baby. I don't think it would be an easy thing to come to terms with if you thought you were going to be locked up for your child's whole life, so I can understand Josh's initial reaction. Saddling a child with a dad who's in prison for their entire childhood might not be the kindest thing for the kid. He might have been better to let them move on without him. It might have been the less selfish thing to do... Lucky he didn't have to!  I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this - will he settle into fatherhood, given that he had no positive male role models himself?

And I absolutely loved that awkward little scene between him and Phoebe, and her refreshingly honest admission that she basically jumped Ash as soon as she was released. I'm really liking them together :P

Have to say, I'm very surprised by Hunter's reappearance in this (as what would initially appear as a relatively reformed character? :huh:) I kind of expected him to have fallen in with an even worse crowd during his time in prison and to have become even more angry and damaged as a result of it. Putting him with Darcy is interesting (I never would have imagined you doing that!). I was trying to figure out their age difference... and I was thinking that Heath might have a problem with that (but then he can't really say anything, since he bagged himself April at an indecently young age!) Given that this is Hunter (and this is your story), is Heath right to be worried? That's the question.

Kat and Justin? wrinkles nose :wacko: (simply because I hate Kat with a passion, and quite like Justin :lol: so I don't really want to have to picture that) but hey ho... Nate and Bianca is interesting - I actually think they'd work well. I'm enjoying getting my head around all your couplings. Quite entertaining!

Did I say that I loved this chapter? I really did! :)

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