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Alf's 75th Birthday


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21 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Liked the start to this fanfiction. Looking forwards to where you are taking this :) 

Thanks

19 hours ago, KKB said:

Love this

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18 hours ago, Kristen said:

Great start

liked how you blended together  old and new characters.

Update again soon :)

I will and that was the aim

7 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Awesome chapter

Liked the blending of old and new characters

Update soon please xx

Glad you like that. That the aim

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Chapter 3 

[Sally and Flynn are at the beach as they just arrived back from LA]

Sally: This place haven't changed a bit

Flynn: Yeah well that Summer bay for you

Sally: True that where we met and fell in love

Flynn: Well it the best place to meet anyone 

Sally: True

[Sally sees two familer faces walking towards her]

Brax: Sally it been a while haven't it. How Pippa doing?

[Sally hugs Brax]

Sally: She so much better thanks for everything Brax and you as well Ricky

Ricky: I just glad she ok

[Flynn watches on]

Brax: We both are

Sally: Oh Brax and Ricky this is Flynn my husband

Flynn: Brax, Ricky hi it nice to meet you, it seems like you know Pippa my daughter

Ricky: Yeah we do she and Darcy Brax Brother daughter were pretty close

Flynn: Right

Sally: Well I going to the Summer Bay house to see Alf and Leah and whoever else is already back. Do you want to come?

Brax: Yeah for sure let's go

[Sally, Flynn, Brax and Ricky walk to the Summer bay house and go inside and see Shannon and Alf]

Shannon: Sal long time no see

Sally: Yeah it has been

[Sally and Shannon hug]

Shannon: Shane and Vinnie back too

Sally: Hold on I thought Vinnie

Shannon: it a long story

Flynn: Sally who this

Shannon: Im Shannon and Sal like a sister to me so don't hurt her

Flynn: Hi Shannon Im Flynn and I wont hurt her

Alf: Brax hey

Brax: Hey mate

[They man hug as Leah, Vinnie, Shane, Hunter and Vj walk in]

Leah: Ricky, Hey Omg Sally hello

[ Leah gives me both a hug and Vinnie hugs Sally]

Vinnie: We need to catch up later Sal

Sally: Yeah we really do

[Phoebe and Brody walks in and Phoebe sees Ricky and hugs her]

Phoebe: Ricky I missed you

Ricky: I missed you to

Brax: What about me

Phoebe: And you as well Brax

Brody: As in Brax who owned Angelos Brax

Brax: Yeah that me

Brody: Im Brody I own Angelos well Salt now

Brax: Well I come check it out tonight

Brody: How about all of you come for dinner tonight it on the house that way we can all catch up or get to know each other

Shane: Sounds good

Alf: Invite Ziggy to after all she like your second best friend after Phoebe

Brody: Yeah I will call her

Sally: See you all tonight

[They all go there different ways to get ready for Salt that evening]

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1 hour ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Interesting story with an eclectic mix of characters.Shocked that you did the unthinkable and had Shane there broken up from Angel (freeing him up for Shannon perhaps?).Looking forward to seeing where you take this!

You might be right about what your thinking about Shane and Shannon

15 hours ago, christine king said:

Great story. Just catching up. Great to see new and old characters connect.

Thanks glad your liking it

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Chapter 4

(At Salt that night eating dinner when a person walk in)

Sally: Lance

Lance: Hey Sal

(They hug)

Alf: Lance this is Brax, Ricky, Phoebe, Brody and Ziggy

Phoebe and Brody: Hey Lance

Ziggy: You got a cool name

Lance: Thanks

Brax: Come join us

Ricky: We have lots of food

Flynn: Come on mate join us

(Lance and Sally sits down and they eat when a older man walks in)

Alf: Don good to see you come and join us

Don: I will when the other two guests come in they are just parking the car

Sally: Well who are they

Don: Two people you and Flynn well be happy to see

(Two  People walk in)

Flynn: Well who

Ric: Hey dad

(Flynn and Ric man hug then he hugs Cassie)

Cassie: Hey Mr Stewart hey Sal 

Brax: Come join us

Ric: We didn't bring money

Brody: it fine it on me

Cassie: You sure

Phoebe: He sure

(They all sit and eat and talk)

 

 

 

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