Ludub Posted September 19, 2016 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2016 (edited) Oh Red, I really wish that you could write for the show! This is just brilliant. You capture the tone of every character just perfectly. I love it. I can hear them when they speak. Well done! Love the atmosphere at Irene's with everyone helping Billie to move in. Glad that Irene isn't being silly about VJ staying and that Olivia hasn't thrown a strop (like I thought she might!) Absolutely loved Hunter's scene with Marilyn. Pretty menacing really and thoroughly understandable that she'd be frightened of him. Psycho Hunter making a reappearance? (I do hope so!) Very kind of John to help Ash out like that. He is a bit of a soft touch really, isn't he? Really pleased that Roo (and we) got a bit of closure as far Maddy's concerned. Good to know that she's doing ok, and looking to the future! And, oooh, so excited that Dex is coming back! Is he moving back to the farmhouse?! Fingers crossed! Really looking forward to the next chapter! x Edited September 19, 2016 by Ludub Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittCatt Posted September 19, 2016 Report Share Posted September 19, 2016 Great chapter! Really liking how Billie is being supported by Ash, her friends and Irene. This Hunter storyline is coming along nicely.. maybe he shouldn't be glaring at and scaring Marilyn.. But like Ludub, i hope psycho Hunter is coming back. And i like the arrival of Maddy, as well as Dex! I look forward to more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 19, 2016 Report Share Posted September 19, 2016 12 hours ago, Kristen said: Liked the family banter between The Morgan's. Oh Nate and Tori. Liked the twist that Dexter is back. 11 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Loved the family banter between the Morgans Interesting that Dexter is back Thanks for the prompt responses! Glad that you both like the Morgans and Dexter. 6 hours ago, Ludub said: Oh Red, I really wish that you could write for the show! This is just brilliant. You capture the tone of every character just perfectly. I love it. I can hear them when they speak. Well done! Love the atmosphere at Irene's with everyone helping Billie to move in. Glad that Irene isn't being silly about VJ staying and that Olivia hasn't thrown a strop (like I thought she might!) Excuse me while I blush a bit.Irene is consistently inconsistent with her attitude to sleepovers, I tend to lean towards the more liberal side when writing her and in this case when (as far as she knows) VJ and Billie are expecting a baby it'd be a bit silly for her to put her foot down. 6 hours ago, Ludub said: Absolutely loved Hunter's scene with Marilyn. Pretty menacing really and thoroughly understandable that she'd be frightened of him. Psycho Hunter making a reappearance? (I do hope so!) 1 hour ago, KittCatt said: This Hunter storyline is coming along nicely.. maybe he shouldn't be glaring at and scaring Marilyn.. But like Ludub, i hope psycho Hunter is coming back. You will have to wait and see how far Hunter goes... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted September 19, 2016 Report Share Posted September 19, 2016 I really liked the Hunter and Marilyn part He seems he's out for some sort of revenge against the whole town maybe Is the danger really over for the Morgans? Good to have Dexter back always liked his character.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 19, 2016 Report Share Posted September 19, 2016 4 hours ago, pembie said: Good to have Dexter back always liked his character.. Thanks, pembie, glad you liked.I had a vague idea for him pop into my head so that got thrown into this giant melting pot... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted September 20, 2016 Report Share Posted September 20, 2016 Liked how Mads said her prothetic doesn't get AS many stares. GREAT that Dex is back in the mix ...... is he married/with April in this fic, btw ???? Hunter and Maz was intriguing, and was cooooool how Billie has lots of things now cos she doesn't have to store everything in the boot of her gorgeous Peugoet 504 !!!! REALLY enjoying this !!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 20, 2016 Report Share Posted September 20, 2016 3 hours ago, JosieTash said: Liked how Mads said her prothetic doesn't get AS many stares. GREAT that Dex is back in the mix ...... is he married/with April in this fic, btw ???? Hunter and Maz was intriguing, and was cooooool how Billie has lots of things now cos she doesn't have to store everything in the boot of her gorgeous Peugoet 504 !!!! REALLY enjoying this !!!! Thanks, JT. Everything up to 6462 still happened, so Dexter and April still got married and left in the same way. As for what's going on with Dexter now, you'll have to wait and see... Not sure how long it'll take me to get another chapter up so err on the side of caution and say weekend at the latest again. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted September 21, 2016 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2016 Ooooh! Interesting! So Hunter's not off the hook just yet then?! (Uncharacteristically competent police work). Really hoping Hunter will go on the rampage before they get the chance to lock him up. Ash has been very lucky to have John on his side. Also interested to see what happens with Shandi. Really looking forward to the next chapter x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 21, 2016 Report Share Posted September 21, 2016 Great chapter oh so Hunter stole the safe it sounds like. Ash has been very lucky to have John. I wonder what will happen with Shandi. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 22, 2016 Report Share Posted September 22, 2016 Awesome chapter Liked how Ash is really lucky to have John on his side Uh oh sounds like Hunter is about to be busted for stealing the safe Looking forwards to the next chapter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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