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Thanks KittCatt and Red Ranger 1!  I really appreciate the feedback! So glad you both liked it. I thought Kyle deserved to find a bit of peace after everything he's been through so I went with the war

Thanks!  Glad you enjoyed it! I thought it was about time someone told Phoebe what a horrible person she is! lol! I thought the 'Brax isn't even your brother' thing was something that she might a

Thanks everyone for the feedback. I've exceeded my 'likes' again today (oops!) Glad you all liked the Heath scenes. I think Heath has always cared about Kyle deep down, even if he hasn't been com

Great chapter

Seems like the people on the news might of abused Kyle.

I hope Kyle tells Tamara about his past.

I look forward to more

Update again soon :)


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Great Chapter!

Once again great writing, especially the vivid flashbacks and dreams. You capture Kyle's distress so well.

Sad that Kyle is affected by what happened in his past so quickly. Glad he has got Tamara for support but he is adamant he doesn't want her to know. I think it's only going to get worse if he doesn't talk about it. 

I look forward to more, update soon :P

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19 minutes ago, BraxandCharlie4Ever said:

Just read this! 

Absolutely love it! Interesting take on Kyle's background, looking forward to reading more! 

Noah! :wub: One of my favourite names ever.

Can't wait to read more. :D

Thank you for reading! Really appreciate the feedback! ?

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14 minutes ago, Suzza101 said:

Great chapter 

I liked the bit with Zac calling him a young buck 

Awww poor Kyle i feel more sorry for him each chapter 

Glad hes going to talk to pheobe

Update soon please

Thanks! Really appreciate the feedback and glad you're enjoying the story so far. Thought I'd try to bring in a bit of light relief with the birthday party so it's not all doom and gloom. I feel terrible for Kyle and it's me that's writing it! lol!

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