Ludub Posted May 22, 2016 Report Share Posted May 22, 2016 3 hours ago, KittCatt said: Great chapter! Poor Kyle (Im just going to keep calling him that) Glad Kat stuck to her guns and didn't tell Nate what was going on. But i think she may have to tell Tamara (and Health) so they can understand what is going on. Very powerful scene when he didn't want Tamara to call him Kyle. You know how to make him suffer don't you It was good to get some more insight into the Melbourne case and what has happened. Glad the detective showed some compassion. Really liked the line Kyle certainly had a chequered past but he was hardly that much of a criminal mastermind. I look forward to more, update soon Thanks KittCatt! Always appreciate the feedback x To be honest, I do actually feel a bit guilty writing all this misery for Kyle. I mean, how much more can the poor fella take?! 3 hours ago, Suzza101 said: Great chapter Aww my hearts breaking for Kyle (i dont know what else to call him) I wonder how Tamara and Heath will take the news. I really hope that Heath tells Kyle thats hes still his brother. Update soon please Thanks Suzza! I've run out of likes for this evening. Really appreciate the feedback and glad you're enjoying it, even if I am tugging at your heartstrings! lol! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 22, 2016 Report Share Posted May 22, 2016 Great chapter poor Kyle. Eager to find out who Kyle really is. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 23, 2016 Report Share Posted May 23, 2016 13 hours ago, Kristen said: Great chapter poor Kyle. Eager to find out who Kyle really is. I look forward to more Update again soon Thanks a million for the continued support Kristen much appreciated! I know... poor 'Kyle' Thanks for reading! x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted May 24, 2016 Report Share Posted May 24, 2016 WHOA. That is really.... WOW. Kyle isn't Kyle, then who is he? Don't like how that cop thinks 'Kyle' was apart of it. Look forward to see who Kyle really is, and what his real name is. Poor Kyle. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 24, 2016 Report Share Posted May 24, 2016 (edited) 40 minutes ago, ZacxLeah said: WHOA. That is really.... WOW. Kyle isn't Kyle, then who is he? Don't like how that cop thinks 'Kyle' was apart of it. Look forward to see who Kyle really is, and what his real name is. Poor Kyle. Thanks ZacxLeah! Glad you enjoyed it Poor Kyle is right!... I feel really bad for the poor guy I'll hopefully have the next chapter up soon Edited May 24, 2016 by Ludub 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 24, 2016 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2016 I absolutely loved Heath here, and the way he stepped up for "Kyle". No idea what news Kat has got, I'd guess something about "Kyle"'s real identity but I'm not sure what she'd consider good news... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted May 24, 2016 Report Share Posted May 24, 2016 LOVE IT! Kyle should go see his foster parents, it could be good for him to get some more solid ground, when everything is so shaken right now. Great chapter. Update soon! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted May 24, 2016 Report Share Posted May 24, 2016 Great chapter I love how Heath stepped up as an older brother. I think Kyle should go see his foster parents. Wonder what news Kat has Update soon please. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 24, 2016 Report Share Posted May 24, 2016 Great chapter Glad Heath told Kyle that he will still be his brother. Wonder what the good news is maybe Kat knows who Kyle really is finally. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted May 25, 2016 Report Share Posted May 25, 2016 Great chapter Liked how Heath told Kyle that he will be still his brother. It reminded me of the Brax/Casey in the gym scene back in 2014 on the show after Casey found out he wasn't a Braxton. Looking forwards to the next chapter xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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