Guest Posted June 17, 2016 Report Share Posted June 17, 2016 Great chapter can't believe Duncan and his cousins tried to sell little Kyle. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 17, 2016 Report Share Posted June 17, 2016 Great chapter So shocked that Duncan and his cousins tried to sell Kyle Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted June 17, 2016 Report Share Posted June 17, 2016 Powerful chapter. Very well written but so very shocking and tremendously sad. I feel so sorry for poor little Kyle I think his Auntie Katie made the wrong decision in not going to the police. I know that Duncan threatened to kill him but if the police had just showed up he wouldn't have had the time to do it. My heart is breaking for him! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 20, 2016 Report Share Posted June 20, 2016 (edited) Great chapter Poor Kyle and Kyle's poor Aunty Katie. Felt sorry for Heath at the end of the chapter. I look forward to more. Update again soon Edited June 20, 2016 by Kristen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted June 20, 2016 Report Share Posted June 20, 2016 Poor Kyle Feel very sorry for Heath because he'll never get to apologise to him now. He didn't know how much he was probably hurting Kyle with all those stupid names and he can't go back and change it either. It's something he's just going to have to live with. That would be horrible! Still, if Kyle had really thought that Heath didn't love him, I don't think he would have confided in him the way that he did. He obviously trusted him. Heath even stayed with him that night he was so upset. I don't think Kyle really saw him as a bully even if he did call him hurtful names. Looking forward to the next chapter. x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 21, 2016 Report Share Posted June 21, 2016 Great chapter Felt sorry for Heath Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted July 1, 2016 Report Share Posted July 1, 2016 (edited) Jeez, I'm in floods of tears here So very very sad, but really beautiful too. All the flashbacks were really touching, and its lovely to see all the happy memories that his friends and family had of him. I feel terrible for Heath though. It would be horrible to carry that kind of guilt around and not be able to do anything about it. Really enjoyed this story Thanks for sharing it with us! Looking forward to your next one. x My favourite scene was the one with Casey and baby Harley. So sweet but I also thought the one with Heath sitting on Kyle was very powerful. Terrible for Heath to have to think that he did that, and how that must have made Kyle feel. Again, something he can't change now Edited July 1, 2016 by Ludub Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 2, 2016 Report Share Posted July 2, 2016 (edited) Great story. I enjoyed all the flashbacks. my favourite one was Casey and Baby Harley. thanks for sharing this with us Suzza. Edited July 2, 2016 by Kristen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted July 2, 2016 Report Share Posted July 2, 2016 Awesome story, Suzza101 Liked the ending to this fanfiction Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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