Inactive User Posted May 7, 2016 Report Share Posted May 7, 2016 Great chapter Liked how Oscar was honest with Skye Loved how Olivia is there for Skye as she needed someone like Olivia to confide in Liked the talk between Maddy and Matt, Oscar Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted May 8, 2016 Report Share Posted May 8, 2016 (edited) I think the baby's going to be Oscar's if only to throw a spanner in the works with Skye.. Have a good holiday Edited May 8, 2016 by pembie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 10, 2016 Report Share Posted May 10, 2016 Great chapter Glad they told Alf and co about Maddy being pregnant. Glad Oscar and Matt came to a truce. Good Skye was there for Oscar. I hope the baby is Matt's but if it's Oscar's I'm good with that too. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 10, 2016 Report Share Posted May 10, 2016 Well done to Matt and Oscar for being grown up enough (now that they've calmed down) to talk rationally about the situation they're in. Was a nice chat between them. Loved Matt's 'crazy kids' dialogue ;-) very funny! As I've said before, I think you write dialogue exceptionally well. You have a great ear for each character's particular way of speaking. I can hear their voices in my head when I read your stories. Well done :-) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted May 11, 2016 Report Share Posted May 11, 2016 (edited) Great chapter Liked how Matt and Oscar come to a truce Loved how Skye is there for Oscar Looking forwards to the next chapter And by the way, I hope you have a good hoilday, RR1 Edited May 11, 2016 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted May 11, 2016 Report Share Posted May 11, 2016 i know that Olivia's just being all protective, but i like how Skye is sticking by Oscar. LOOVED Oscar's “Like…what point Maddy was in her menstruation cycle at the time, the frequency of ‘the act’, relative sperm count…” it's soooooo him. GREAT pre hols cliffhanger you've left us with !!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittCatt Posted May 11, 2016 Report Share Posted May 11, 2016 Great Chapter! Glad Maddy, Matt and Oscar were honest and told everyone about the pregnancy and paternity test. Glad Matt and Oscar were able to put aside their differences for Maddy. Liked the mention of Oscar previously being in a situation like this. Great dialogue. Liked the addition of Irene. It's up to Skye whether she sticks by Oscar if he is the father. Olivia's right though - she would always come second or third after the baby and Maddy and they only just began a relationship. Hope the baby is Matt's but i have a feeling it will be Oscar's. I look forward to more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hward Posted May 11, 2016 Report Share Posted May 11, 2016 Just read the story so far, and have to say I'm really enjoying it. I loved Oscar and Skye together. I hope we find out who the father is next chapter. Enjoy your holidays Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoebe Posted May 12, 2016 Report Share Posted May 12, 2016 Gah! A cliffhanger!! I can't wait to found out who it is! Enjoy your holiday and update when you can Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted May 13, 2016 Report Share Posted May 13, 2016 Sorry didn't realise you updated. Cool that Matt and Oscar seem to have agreed to call a truce. I wonder if that lasts. I also think Oscar and Skye will be on the verge of breaking up whatever she says.. Hope your holiday going good for you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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