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Well their all got themselves into a right pickle here.. Hopefully the baby's Matt's but I doubt it will be that simple.. Love how your writing all the characters reactions to things.

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Great chapter 

liked Matt and Josh having a conversation.

Liked Roo being mentioned as Maddy's surrogate mum.

I look forward to more 

Update again soon :)

 

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Great Chapter!

Continue to enjoy the conversations between the different characters. Evie and Oscar in particular was great, as well as Matt, Oscar and Josh at Angelo's.

Hope both Matt and Oscar step up and talk to Maddy. Drinking isn't going to help. Talking to each other once the initial shock might help.

I look forward to more, update soon :P

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Great chapter. Really enjoying this story :-) Liked the scene with Evie and Matt. Matt wanting to turn the sun off made me smile. Glad Matt and Oscar agreed to sit down and talk rationally, at least they're both being a bit more sensible about things now.

Have a lovely holiday! x

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Great chapter

Liked the talk between Matt and Evie.

Glad Maddy invited Matt and Oscar over so they can have a talk. 

I really hope the baby Is Matt's.

Have a great holiday :)

 

 

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Great Chapter!

Glad Oscar was honest with Skye. I do wonder if she will end things with him. Glad she has Olivia to confide in.

Glad Oscar, Matt and Maddy finally talked and were sort of reasonable. Hope the baby is Matt's.

I look forward to more, have a nice holiday :P

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You get the feeling that the baby will be Oscar's ....... as much as various ppl don't want it to be.

 

Olivia was very protective of Skye - very true to character, and this was cooool ......   

 

“I’m trying to find a way to turn that light up there off.”

  Evelyn glanced up in the sky for a moment.“I think you need to wait eleven hours.”

 

Hope your hols are awesome !!!!!

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